人教版（2019）必修一UNIT1 Teenager Life 单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）素材.docx

人教版（新课标）必修一UNITlteenagerlife+单元话题写作（含解析高分句型词汇）副标题考试范围：XXX；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：XXX学校：姓名：班级：考号：题号一总分得分一、书面表达：本大题共15小题，共375分。1.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近学习压力很大，他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1 .表示理解；2 .你的建议及理由。注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,1.iHua【答案】DearJim,I'mSOiTytoIearnthatyou'vebeenUnderaIOtOfOleSSUrelately.Itisnaturaltofeelpressuredwhenyouattendanewschool.Herearesomesuggestionsthatcanhelpyoudealwithstress.First,trytobuildupyourconfidence.Studyisalong-termprocessandconfidenceplaysanimportantroleinit.Sonevergiveupnomatterwhathappens.Second,youshouldfindyourownstrengthsandweaknesses,andseekhelpfrombothteachersandclassmateswhenfacingdifficultiesandstress.LaStbunotleast,doingmoreDhySiCaIexerciseCankeepyoufitasWellasrelaxyourself.Ihopeyouwillgetoutofyourtroublesoon.Ibelieveitwillallworkout.Cheerup!LetmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.Yours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复邮件，对他因学习压力很大感到苦恼表示理解，并提出建议。在写作时可以使用一些高级词汇或者句式，为文章增彩。【结构布局】引言：表示理解中心：你的建议及理由结尾：表达期望【亮点词汇】©playanimportantrolein在中扮演重要角色getoutOf摆脱【高分句型】msorrytoIeamthatyou'vebeenunderalotofpressurelately,（that弓I导的宾语从句）LaStbutnotleast,doingmorephysicalexercisecankeepyoufitaswellasrelaxyourself.（动词的ing形式短语作主语）【拓展词汇】©practical实用的asfarassb.beconcerned依某人来看give/Offersb.advice/tips/suggestionsonsth.在某方面给某人建议【拓展句型】Ifirmlybelieve,withyoureffort,youcanmanagetogetover/overcomethesedifficulties.我坚信，通过您的努力，您会成功克服这些困难的。YOilhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout.,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductiveSUggeStiOnS.对于你来信问我关于的事，现提供几条建议。2.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对你校的学生社团非常感兴趣，计划下学期参加其中一个。他向你征询建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：（1）推荐的社团；（2）推荐的理由；（3）建议他做哪些准备。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,1.iHua【答案】DearJim,mmorethandelightedtoknowyouarecuriousabouttheclubactivitiesofourschoolandwanttojoinonenextterm.I'dIiketorecommendPekingOPeraCIUbIoyou,ftomWhiChIbelieveyouWinenjoyalot.1recommendthisclubtoyouforthefollowingreasons.First,PekingOperaislikeapearlinChinesetraditionalart.JoiningthisclubcangiveyouatasteofChinesetraditionalartformsandevenhaveahands-onexperience.Besides,theclubwillregularlyorganizevariousactivities,suchasinvitingfamousactorstoperform,anddrawingPekingOperamake-ups.ConsideringyourinterestinChineseculture,IbelievegettingclosetoPekingOperawillalsobeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.WhenitComeSloDreDaration.youCanWatChSOrnefamousPekingODeraVideOSOnIheInIemelOrreadSomerelevantmaterials,WhiChWiIIdefinitelybebeneficialIoyou.Hopemysuggestionscanbeofhelp.IfyouwanttoIeamanythingmore,don'thesitatetocontactme.Bestwishes!Yours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】考生应认真审题，把握文章中心，明确写作要点和所使用时态。要把写作要求的所有内容写清，写作过程中注意一些句式和短语的使用，写作过程中注意一些连接词和过渡句使用，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。【亮点词汇】becuriousabout对好奇；beOfheIP有帮助的【高分句型】l,dliketorecommendPekingoperaclubtoyou,fromwhichIbelieveyouwillenjoyalot.（fromwhich连接非限制性定语从句）Whenitcomestopreparations,youcanwatchsomefamousPekingoperavideosontheInternetorreadsomerelevantmaterials,whichwilldefinitelybebeneficialforyou.（when连接时间状语从句，WhiCh连接非限制性定语从句）【结构布局】引言：说明活动并分享建议；中心：推荐的社团及理由；并说明建议他做哪些准备；结尾：期待对方回复。【拓展词汇】give/Offersb.advice/tips/suggestionsonSth.在某方面给某人建议PraCtiCal实用的【拓展句型】©Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout.,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductiveSUggeStiOnS.对于你来信问我关于的事，现提供几条建议。1thinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowthefollowingadvicebelow.如果您能听从以下建议，我认为您会成功的。3 .你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“SettingGoals”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：(1)目标设定的重要性；设定目标时的注意事项。写作要求：词数80左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。SettingGoalsAlbertEinsteinsaid,"Ifyouwanttoliveahappylife,tieittoagoal."Iquiteagreewithit.【答案】SettingGoalsAlbertEinsteinsaid,"Ifyouwanttoliveahappylife,tieittoagoal."Iquiteagreewithit.（Settinggoalsisimportantbecauseitgivesyouafocusinlife.Bysettinggoals,youknowwhereyouaregoinginlifesothatyouwilltryyourbesttogetthere.Moreover,itisadvisabletosetgoalsbasedonyourabilitiesandskillssothatyoucanmanagetoachievethem.Afteryousetagoal,itisimportanttosticktoitandworktowardsit.Inc。IldUSiOn.ifyouSelDrrCtiCalRoalSandSDarenoefforttoattainIhern,YoUWiIlenjoyaSUCCeSSfUlIife.【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇命题作文，要求考生以'SettingGoals''为题写一篇发言稿。文章主要用第一和第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主来展开。在写作过程中注意应用恰当的过渡词，使得行文连贯。【亮点词汇】inconclusion总之SParenoefforttodoSth.不遗余力地做某事【高分句型】©Settinggoalsisimportantbecauseitgivesyouafocusinlife.（动词-ing形式作主语；because引导原因状语从句）（2）Inconclusion,ifyousetpracticalgoalsandsparenoefforttoattainthem,youwillenjoyasuccessfullife,（if引导条件状语从句）【结构布局】引言：引出话题，发表观点中心：目标设定的重要性、设定目标时的注意事项结尾：总结观点【拓展词汇】desiretodo渴望做inspiring鼓舞人心的【拓展句型】©Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatsuccessistheresultofcontinuoushardwork.（人们认为成功是日复一日的努力。）（2）A1Iinall,onthewaytosuccess,oneshouldbringhispatienceaswellasperseverance.（总之，在成功的道路上，一个人需要耐心和毅力。）4 .假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike即将来你校做一年的交换生。他来信向你寻求如何尽快适应你校学习和生活的建议，请你写一封回信，内容包括：1 .表示欢迎；2 .提供建议；3 .表达祝愿。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMike,Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMike,mthrilledtohearthatyou,recomingtoourschoolasanexchangestudent.Awarmwelcomeawaitsyouhere.Iunderstandthatitischallengingtoadapttoanewenvironment,sohereareafewsuggestionsthatmighthelpyousettleinquickly.FirStOfa11.it'simportanttoactivelyDartieiPateinCIaSSrOOmactivities,WhiChWiHhelpyoubetterUnderStandandgrasptheknowledge.Anddon'tbeafraidtoreachouttoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpifyouneedit.JOiningaCIUbisalsoagreatway,becauseyouWiIlmeetnewfriendsandbecomemoreinvolvedinIheSChOoICommUnily.Iwishyouallthebestduringyourstayhere.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!Sincerelyyours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给朋友Mike写一封回信，就如何尽快适应学校学习和生活提出建议。写作时，要注意添加适当的衔接词，使行文连贯，另外，可以添加一些高级词汇及句型结构为作文添彩。【结构布局】开头：表示欢迎中心：提供建议结尾：表达祝愿【亮点词汇】ad叩tto适应Settlein适应新环境【高分句型】FirSIofall,it,simportanttoactivelyparticipateinclassroomactivities,whichwillhelpyoubetterunderstandandgrasptheknowledge.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）©Joiningaclubisalsoagreatway,becauseyouwillmeetnewfriendsandbecomemoreinvolvedintheschoolcommunity.（because引导的原因状语从句）【拓展词汇】beaddictedto沉迷于doharmto对有害expandone'shorizons拓宽某人的视野【拓展句型】®Ifirmlybelieve,withyoureffort,youcanmanagetogetover/overcomethesedifficulties.（我坚信，通过你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。）©Confrontedwith.,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodosth.（面对，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来）5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。1hadaproblem.TalentNightwascomingup,butIhadnotalents.KatecanmakeanythingusingOrigami（折纸）.Tommycreatesbreath-takingbeatsonoverturnedplasticbuckets.Oliviatrainsherpettydogtodotricks.Andthosearejustmyfriends.Mygradealsoboastsfourdancers,agymnast,twobakers,ayogaexpert,sixsingers,andfiveartists,amongothers.Everydaymyteacheraskedifddecidedwhattodo.AndeverydayIremindedherthatIhadnotalents."Nonsense,Benjamin,"shesaid.',You'llthinkofsomething.""I'lljusthavetobesickthedayoftheshow,"Iannouncedtomyfriendsoneafternoon."Ifyougetacold,besuretocoughonme.""Youmusthaveatalent,"saidKate."Let'smakealist.Whatareyougoodat?,"Eating,"Ianswered."WatchingTV."Katerolledhereyes."Benjamin,beserious.""Tormenting（捉弄）mylittlebrother.""Areyoukiddingme?,Katelookedatourfriends.,'Comeon,guys.WhatareBenjamin'stalents?""He'sgoodwithdogs,"saidOlivia.',Mydogadoreshim.""Oh,great,"Isaid."Icansitonthestagewhilehelicksmyface.BenjaminBelinski,HumanDogToy.""Benjamin'sfunnyandhumorous/1saidTommy.Heturnedtome."Youcoulddoacomedyroutine.,"Yeah.EveryjokecouldbeabouthowIhavenotalents,"Isaid."Benjamin,"saidKate,"maybeyoudon,tknowhowIOjUggIe（变戏法）,butyourbirthdaypartiesarethebest.""Yeah,"agreedOlivia,"andyoualwaysgetustogethertodostuff.Likehavinggamenightsorridingbikesafterschoolorwhenweheldthatyardsale.Theweekyouhadthefluwedidn'tdoanythingfun.""You'relikethegluethatholdsustogether,"addedTommy."Oh,great,"Isaid."BenjaminBelinski,HumanGlueGun."Buttheircommentsgotmethinking.Lyinginbedthatnight,Icameupwithaplansoexcitingthatittookmetwohourstofallasleep.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。InthemorningyIcouldn,twaittotellmyteacher.Onthenightofthebigevent,IfeltsonervousthatIhadtoforcemyselftoeatdinner.【答案】InthenomingfIcouldn7waittotellmyteacher.Inthenextfewweeks,Iwrotealonglistandaskedalotofpeopletodojobs.Ievengottheprincipaspermissiontocovertheschool'stableswithblueandyellowpaper.Thegymhasbeencompletelytransformed.Itlooksmagical,myteacherexclaimedinamazement.Onthenightofthebigevent,IfeltsonervousthatIhadtoforcemyselftoeatdinner.Theshowbegan,Tommywowinguswithhisdrumming,thesingersstayingintunethroughouttheirsongsandthegymnastastonishinguswithhandspringsandbackwalkovers.Ourguestssmackedtheirlipsoverstudent-bakedcookiesastheybrowsedthedisplayofpaperworkbyKateandotherartwork.Onthenightofthebigevent,IfeltsonervousthatIhadtoforcemyselftoeatdinner.Afterthelastact,performersgatheredforafinalcurtaincall.Myteachersteppedontothestageastheapplausedieddown.Everybodycontributedandcooperatedtoputtogetherthismarvelousnightsheannounced.However,onepersondeservesspecialrecognitionformakingitproceedsosmoothly.Hestayedbehindthescenes,butpleasegiveabighandtoanenormoustalent一Benjamin,Producer!Shepointedlomeinthebackofthegym.Peopleturnedtospotme.Ibowed.Benjamin,Producer.Ilikethesoundofthat.【解析】一、文意梳理【原文大意】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了才艺之夜即将到来，但是Benjamin觉得自己没有什么才艺，朋友们给他一些建议，这引起了他的思考，想出了一个令人兴奋的计划。【段落续写】根据第一段句首内容“早上，我迫不及待地告诉我的老师。”可知，第一段可描写我安排准备演出。根据第二段句首内容“在大型活动的当晚，我感到非常紧张，不得不强迫自己吃晚饭。”可知第二段可描写演出结束，老师对大家的表现表示肯定，并且特别指出我的贡献。二、线索厘清【续写线索】得到校长的允许一一我感到紧张一一演出结束一一老师走上舞台一一全场给我热烈的掌声人们转过来看着我，我鞠躬【词汇激活】行为类得到：get/receive/gain开始：begin/start走上舞台：stepontothestage/walkontothestage给某人热烈掌声：giveabighandtosb./clapone'shandsforsb.情感类紧张：nervous/agitated/tense三、范文鉴赏【高分句型】nthenightofthebigevent,IfeltsonervousthatIhadtoforcemyselftoeatdinner.（so.that.引导的结果状语从句）Ourguestssmackedtheirlipsoverstudent-bakedcookiesastheybrowsedthedisplayofpaperworkbyKateandotherartwork.（as引导的时间状语从句）6.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：（1）写信目的；个人优势；能做的事情。注意：词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】DearSirorMadam,I'mWritingtoaI）IVtobeaVoIUnteerfortheChineSePaintingEXhibitiOnWhiChWillbeheldinyourartgallery.IIhinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIhaVeIeanICdChineSeDaintingSinCechildhood.Besides,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings.IfIamIlICkYenoughlobeChOSenasavolunteerCanShoWViSitorSaroundthegalleryandgetIhemtoknowmoreaboutChineSepainting.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇给出提示内容的应用文作文，题目要求假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：（1）写信目的；（2）个人优势；（3）能做的事情。写作时，注意书信格式。写作内容应该扣题，不可偏离题意。所列提示要写全面，正确运用时态与语态。根据题目提示可知，本文应该用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。最后检查有无拼写错误，语法错误。【亮点词汇】1 .applyto申请;2 .bequalifiedfor有资格，适于担任3 .lookingforwardto期望【高分句型】I.mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.（which引导的限制性定语从句）2.1thinkIamqualiedforthisjob,becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）3.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepainting,（if弓I导条件状语从句）7.假定你是学生会主席李华，请代表学校给即将来你校学习一年的交换生Tim写一封邮件，内容包括：1 .表示欢迎；2 .简介学校（课程、生活等）。注意：1 .词数80左右；2 .不要出现学校名称和考生本人信息；3 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearTim»Yours,1.iHua【答案】DearTim»IamLiHua,presidentoftheStudentUnion.Onbehalfofourschl,Iamwritingtoexpressesourwelcometoyou.Warmlywelcometoourschooltostudyforoneyear.OUrSChoOlhasbeenSntUPformore100years,SOyouCanexperiencetraditionalChineSeCUltUreinaafantasticenvironment.Inaddition,withadvancedteachingequipmentandhigh-qualityteachers,theschooloffersvariouscourses.Besides,there'recolorfulextracurricularactivitiestocatertoyourtaste.It'sconvenientandeconomicaltoliveinthedormitoryandeatinthedininghall.I'mfirmlyCOnVinCedyouWiIlfallinloveWiththeIifehereandfeelathome.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文写作，话题为写一封邀请信，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。【亮点词汇】onbehalfof代表fallinlovewith爱上【高分句型】urschoolhasbeensetupformore1（X）years,soyoucanexperiencetraditionalChinesecultureinaafantasticenvironment,（so弓I导的结果状语从句）mfirmlyconvincedyouwillfallinlovewiththelifehereandfeelathome.（省略that的宾语从句）【结构布局】引言：介绍写信目的正文：介绍学校的课程和生活结尾：再次表达欢迎【拓展词汇】©informsb.ofsth.告诉某人某事arouseone'sinterest激发某人的兴趣©contributeto有助于【拓展句型】©Wearewaitingeagerlytoknowifourarrangementswillsatisfyyou.（我们迫切地等待着想知道你是否满意我们的安排。）Wenotonlyhaveliteracyclasses,butalsohavepracticecourses,whichIbelieveyouwillbefondof.（我们不仅有识字课，还有实践课，我相信你会喜欢的。）8.假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了MrSSmith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：1 .告知安全返回；2 .感谢她的帮助；3 .表达美好愿望。注意：1 .词数80左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMrsSmith,Yourssincerely,1.iHua【答案】DearMrsSmith,vegotbacksafeandsound.Nowmwritingtoexpressmysincerethankstoyou.DuringmystayinNewYork,youprovidedmewitheverythingneededandeventkthetroubletodrivemearound,makingitsuchawonderfulexperience.WhenIWaSinamess,youalwaysOfferedmetimelyhelp,WhiChturnedeveryawkwardmomentintoIaUghter.Thankyouforallyou'vedoneforme.Wishyouallthebestandhopetoreturnyourkindnesssomeday.Yourssincerely,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】本文为一篇应用文写作，话题为假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了MrSSmith的接待。请你写一封感谢信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。【亮点词汇】©providesb.withsth.提供某人某物awkward令人尴尬的【高分句型】WhenIwasinamess,youalwaysofferedmetimelyhelp,whichturnedeveryawkwardmomentintolaughter.(when引导的时间状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句)Thankyouforallyou'vedoneforme.(省略that引导的限制性定语从句)【结构布局】引言：告知安全返回中心：感谢她的帮助结尾：表达美好愿望【拓展词汇】 appreciation感激 assistance帮助 generosity慷慨【拓展句型】dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandSuPPort.我想借此机会感谢您给予我的及时帮助和支持。Onbehalfof.,dliketoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelp.我仅代表对您的帮助表示真诚的感谢。9.假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报社招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。(1)表示感兴趣；(2)说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；(3)希望得到回复。注意：(1)词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,Yours,1.iHua答案DearSirOrMadam,mastudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.IIeamedfromthenewspaperthatyouwantafewpart-timeEnglishreporters.Iamquiteinterestedinthepositionandwouldliketoapplyforit.Asastudent,vereadalot,whichbroadensmyhorizons.HavingbeenlearningEnglishformanyyears,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Besides,beinganoutgoingstudent,measytogetalongwithandalwayshaveasenseofdutyandcperation.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschlbroadcastingstation,andtherefore1haveaccumulatedmuchexperience.Somconvincedthatmequaltothejob.dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yc)Urs,1.iHUa【解析】略10 .假定你是高二学生李华，你校上周举办了第五届社团成果展(theFifthClubExhibition),请你写一篇活动报道，介绍本次活动。内容包括：(1)活动目的；(2)活动经过；(3)活动反响。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheFifthClubExhibitioninOurSchool【答案】TheFifthClubExhibitioninOurSchool(I)AimedatDrOVidingaPIatfo,TIforStUdentStoShoWCaSetheirtalents,IheFifthClUbEXhibitiOnWaSheldinC)UrSChOolIaStweek,WhiChappealedloallIheStUdentSandteachers.Intheopeningceremony,theprinciplemadeaspeechtoannouncethebeginningoftheexhibition.