专题08书面表达（解析版）.docx

专题08书面表达Writing1(2024天津河东一模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系，她对你们学校每年举办一次的“英语艺术节”非常感兴趣。近日她来信询问去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)活动时间：去年年底，为期一个月；活动内容及意义；对活动的感受；(4)感谢Mrs.Green多年来的关心和帮助，邀请她再来天津。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：英语艺术节EnglishArtsFestivalDearMrs.Green.msogladtohearfromyou.Bestwishes.Yours.1.iJin【答案】DearMrs.Green,msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingthatyouwanttoIeamsomethingaboutourEnglishArtsFestivalheldlastyear,dbegladtotellyousomedetailsasfollows.Asyouknow,theEnglishArtsFestivalisheldonceayear.Intheendoflastyear,itwasheldasscheduleandlastedforamonth,whichwasagreatsuccess.Therewereagreatmanyofactivitiescoveringmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.Allthestudentsandteachersparticipatedinit.Itnotonlybroughtgreaterartisticenjoymenttous,butalsoincreaseourinterestofart.IthinkitwasexcellentandmademeIeammoreaboutarts.ThankyouforhavingcaredandhelpedmealottheseyearsanddohopeyoucouldcometoTianjinagain.Bestwishes.Yours,1.iJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mrs.Green回信介绍去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况。【详解】1 .词汇积累想要：wanttodofeellikedoing举行：holdhost高兴的：gladdelighted参力口：participateintakepartin2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therewereagreatmanyofactivitiescoveringmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.拓展句：Therewereagreatmanyofactivities,whichcoveredmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.【点睛】高分句型1KnowingthatyouwanttoIcamsomethingaboutourEnglishArtsFestivalheldlastyear,dbegladtotellyousomedetailsasfollows.（运用了that引导宾语从句）高分句型2Intheendoflastyear,itwasheldasscheduleandlastedforamonth,whichwasagreatsucceed.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）Writing2（2024天津河西-模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。内容要点：1 .表示欢迎：2 .介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；3 .邀请他们参加元宵节活动。注意：1 .词数不少于100；2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：元宵节TheLanternFestival【答案】Goodmorning,dearfriends.IamLiJin,ChairmanoftheStudentUnionofChenguanghighschool.Onbehalfofourschool,mheretoextendourwarmestwelcometoyouall.SincetheLanternFestivalisaroundthecomer,dliketotakethisopportunitytotalkaboutthisimportantfestival.TheLanternFestivalfallsonthe15thdayofthe1stlunarmonth.Duringthefestival,lanternsofvariousshapesandsizesarchunginthestreetsanduGucssingIantcmriddles''isaninterestingpartofthefestival.Peoplealsoenjoyeatingyuanxiao,whichhelpstounitetheirfamiliesinajoyfulatmosphereduringthefestival.Meanwhile,thereareperformancessuchasdragondancesandliondances,attractinglotsofvisitors.Recently,therehasbeenaLantemShowintheWaterPark.We,llinviteyoutoenjoyittonight.Wishyouhaveagoodtime.Thankyouforlistening.【导语】本篇是应用文写作。在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日，要求考生一篇发言稿欢迎他们，并向他们介绍元宵节，邀请他们参加元宵节活动。【详解】I.词汇积累表示：extendexpress机会：oportunitychance各种各样的：variouskindsof重要的：important一SignifiCanl2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Meanwhile,thereareperformancessuchasdragondancesandliondances,attractinglotsofvisitors.拓展句：Meanwhile,performancessuchasdragondancesandliondancestakeplace,whichattractalargenumberofvisitors.点睛高分句型lSincetheLantcmFestivalisaroundthecomer,dliketotakethisopportunitytotalkaboutthisimportantfestival.（as引导的原因状语从句）高分句型2Peoplealsoenjoyeatingyuanxiao,whichhelpstounitetheirfamiliesinajoyfulatmosphereduringthefestival.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）Writing3（2024天津河北一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：（1）描述照片的内容；（2）说明选择该照片的理由；（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬GreenCampus,FlyingYouth注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,Yours,1.iJin【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamLiJin,astudentfromChenguangHighSchool.WiththeWorldEarthDayapproaching,IamthrilledtoparticipateinthettGreenCampus,FlyingYouth''photographyexhibitiontobeheldonlinebyourschoolandourBritishsisterschool.1wouldliketosubmitaphotothatfeaturesagroupofstudentsplantingtreeswithenthusiasmonasunnyafternoon.Ichoosethisphotobecauseitcapturestheessenceofourcampus'environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeof4GreenCampus,FlyingYouth''.1sincerelyhopethatmyphotowillbeselectedfortheexhibition.Itwouldbeanhonortohavemyworkdisplayedwiththeotheroutstandingentriesandtocontributetotheglobaleffortofpromotingenvironmentalawareness.Thankyouforconsideringmysubmission.Yours,1.iJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。【详解】1.词汇积累兴奋的：IhriHedTeXCiled参力口：participateintakepartin提交：submithandin对做贡献：contributetomakecontributionsto2,句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ichoosethisphotobecauseitcapturestheessenceofourcampus,environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeoft4GreenCampus,FlyingYouth,拓展句：ThereasonwhyIchoosethisphotoisthatitcapturestheessenceofourcampus,environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeof44GreenCampus,FlyingYouth,【点睹J高分句型1WiththeWorldEarthDayapproaching,Iamthrilledtoparticipateinthe44GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”photographyexhibitiontobeheldonlinebyourschoolandourBritishsisterSChooL(使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)【高分句型2Itwouldbeanhonortohavemyworkdisplayedwiththeotheroutstandingentriesandtocontributetotheglobaleffortofpromotingenvironmentalawareness.(使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、havesth.done结构)Writing4(2024天津和平一模)假设你是李津。你的英国朋友ChriS在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福(ablessinginmisfortune)”和“掴苗助长(Topulluptheseedingstohelpthemgrow)”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。1 .鼓励他积极参与：2 .提供帮助(如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等)3 .表达美好的祝愿。注意：(1)词数不少100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头己给出，不计入总词数。DearChris,Yours51.iJin【答案】DearChris,HearingthatyouareconsideringparticipatinginaChinesespeechcontestnextweek,Ithinkyoushouldactivelyengageinit.AndIamwritingtoencourageyoutogetpreparedandgoforit!Regardingthetopicofthespeech,theidiom“ablessinginmisfbrtune,'meansthatsometimeswclosesomething,hutwemaygetbetterreturnsinotheraspects>whileanotheronemeanssometimessimplybeingeagerforsuccesswillonlymakethingsworse.Butasfor(hespeech,Idosuggestyousharesomeexamplesorpersonalexperiences,whichcanshowyourunderstandingofthelanguageandalsoyourlifehereinChina.Inaddition,payattentiontoyourpronunciation,andtrytomakeyourspeechclearandunderstandable.WhatIstronglyrecommendistoshareyourpersonaljourney,orsimilarexpressionsinyourculture,whichwillnotonlymakeyourspeechmoreauthentic,butwillalsoarousetheinterestofyouraudience.Finally,Isincerelywishyougoodresultsinthecompetition.Mostimportantly,enjoyyourself!Yours,1.iJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友ChriS在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福''和"携苗助长''这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向考生求助，要求考生按照要求给他回一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累考虑：considerthinkabout参：participateinjoinin积极地：activelypositively方面：aspcctway2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：HearingthatyouareconsideringparticipatinginaChinesespeechcontestnextweek,Ithinkyoushouldactivelyengageinit.拓展句：BecauseIhearthatyouareconsideringparticipatinginaChinesespeechcontestnextweek,Ithinkyoushouldactivelyengageinit.【点睹X高分句型IJHearing（hatyouareconsideringparticipatinginaChinesespeechcontestnextweek,Ithinkyoushouldactivelyengageinit.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句）【高分句型2WhatIstronglyrecommendistoshareyourpersonaljourney,orsimilarexpressionsinyourculture,whichwillnotonlymakeyourspeechmoreauthentic,butwillalsoarousetheinterestofyouraudience.（运用（What引导的主语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句）