人教版（2019）选择性必修一Unit2lookingintothefuture单元话题写作(含解析高分句型词汇）素材.docx

Ol考情分析本单元围绕未来生活这一主题展开，属于课标内容中人与社会这一主题语境科学与技术主题群一一社会进步与人类文明、科技发展与信息技术创新，科学精神，信息安全主题语境内容02经典好题1.假定你是李华。某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们的未来生活”的征文活动，要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。请根据你的畅想用英语写一篇短文。注意：(1)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(2)词数100左右。文章开头己给出，不计入总词数。Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,【答案1Withscienceandtechnologyusedineveryaspectoflifeatthattime,ourlifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferentfromwhatitisnow.Atthattimewe'11liveinagreenerandmorebeautifulworldwithtrees,birds,blueskiesandsunshine.Andwe'Ilbeabletoarrangethingslikemeals,bathingandsleepwithoursmartphones.Robotswillbeabletodomostofthehouseworkforus.Asforwork,we'IImostlyworkathome,communicatingideasforworkonline.Ifnecessary,we'11havevideomeetingswithourpartnersaroundtheworld.Duringourfreetime,we'IIbeabletotraveltoplacesofinterestinnewvehicleslikeflyingcars.We'11evenenjoyspacetripstothemoonandotherplanets.Allinall,ourlifewillbecomemorecomfortableandconvenient.【解析】【思路点拨】这是提示类说明文的写作。题目要求是：假定你是李华。某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们的未来生活”的征文活动，要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。请根据你的畅想用英语写一篇短文。所以，写作时应该注意以下几点：L人称：应以第一人称为主；2.时态：应以一般将来时为主；3.写作要点：想象科技改变我们的三个方面：1）环境；2）工作；3）生活；4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；5.在能力范围内，使用亮点词汇和高分句型，以此增加文章的亮点，提升文章的档次；6.书写工整，词数100字左右。【亮点词汇】1. withthedevelopmentof.随着的发展；2. arrangethings安排物品；3. communicateideas交流观点4. havevideomeetings开视频会【高分句型】1 .Withscienceandtechnologyusedineveryaspectoflifeatthattime,ourlifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferentfromwhatitisnow.(过去分词used作后置定语；what引导宾语从句)【结构布局】略2 .假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国的移动支付(mobilepayment)很感兴趣，请你给TOm回复邮件并作简要介绍。注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：微信WeChat支付宝Alipay二维码QRcodeDearTom,Yours,1.iHua【答案】DearTom,InyourletteryouaskedaboutmobilepaymentinChina.It'smyhonortointroduceittoyou.IMobiICDaYmCnthasbeenadvocatedaroundtheworld,whichisaDoDUklrWaVtC)DaVbills.InChina,WeChatandAlipayarepopulareverywhere.JUSrSCanningtheORCOdeWithaSmartDhOne.DeODlaCaneasilyPayfortheitemstheyneedandevenSmanbusinessCanbefinishedinthisadvancedway.Itnotonlyfreespeoplefromthetroubleofbringingthecashbutalsosavesthemthetimetopaybills,thusbringingmuchconveniencetoourlife.Yours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题为你的美国朋友TOm在给你的邮件中提到他对中国的移动支付(mobilepayment)很感兴趣，请你给TOm回复邮件并作简要介绍。要点己给出，动笔前，应想好内容框架，而后用正确的单词和语法将内容表达清楚。时态以一般现在时为主。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。【亮点词汇】it'sone'shonorto是某人的荣幸aroundtheworld全世界noionly.butalso.不仅而且©bringmuchconvenienceto带来很多方便【高分句型】©Mobilepaymenthasbeenadvocatedaroundtheworld,whichisapopularwaytopaybills.（which弓I导的非限制性定语从句）JUStscanningtheQRcodewithasmartphone,peoplecaneasilypayfortheitemstheyneedandevensmallbusinesscanbefinishedinthisadvancedway.（动词的-ing形式作状语）【结构布局】引言：写信目的中心：介绍移动支付结尾：总结移动支付的优势【拓展词汇】havegood/bad/positive/negativeeffectson对有好的/坏的/积极的/消极的影响haveeasyaccessto容易接触到withthepopularityOf随着的普及【拓展句型】©Futureisactuallylikeasecret,someareasofwhicharebeyondthereachofourimagination.未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。©MobilepaymentisthemostpopularinChina,whichhasmadepeople'sdailylifemoreandmoreconvenient.动支付在中国最受欢迎，已经使得人们的日常生活越来越方便。3 .假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述参观科技公司的整个过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：3D打印机3Dprinter【答案】1.astFriday,ourclassorganizedanactivitythemed"Technologymakeslifebetter".Inthemorning,wesetoffforatechnologycompany.Anengineertherewelcomedusandgavealectureon3Dprinting,introducingitshistory,developmentandapplicationinfieldslikearchitecture,medicine,etc.Thenheshowedushowthe3Dprinterworks.Wewereamazedatthemagicoftechnologyandcouldn'twaittogiveitatry.Ourgroupfirstdesigneda3Dmodelofabikeandthenoperatedtheprinterasinstructed.Watchingthebikegraduallytakingshape,wefeltexcited.WhenallOUrWorkSWeredisplayedOnIhetable,WeadmiredIhemandSOmeK）OkDhOtOStorecordthisUnfOrgettabIeexperience.ThiSisreallyaneducativeandeye-openingactivityinWhiChIWaSimpressedWiththeCOnVeninnCeandbenefilsbroughtbytechnology.【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题是记述以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动，写作时应该注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可以适当增加一些衔接词，以便行文连贯。【亮点词汇】Setoff出发cantwaittodosth.迫不及待做某事©giveitatry试一下【高分句型】Whenallourworksweredisplayedonhetable,weadmiredthemandsomelookphotostorecordthisunforgettableexperience,（when引导的时间状语从句）ThiSisreallyaneducativeandeye-openingactivityinwhichIwasimpressedwiththeconvenienceandbenefitsbroughtbytechnology.（介词+关系代词引导的定语从句）【结构布局】引言：说明活动主题和时间中心：记述活动过程结尾：介绍活动收获【拓展词汇】©intelligent智能的，聪明的SCientifiCalIy科学地SignifiCanCe意义，重要性【拓展句型】©Futureisactuallylikeasecret,someareasofwhicharebeyondthereachofourimagination.未来事实上就像一个谜，有些领域我们简直无法想象。©Thereisnodoubtthatmodernscienceandtechnologybringusconvenienceandcomfortinlife.亳无疑问的是现代科技给我们生活带来了舒适和便捷。4.假设在2080年照顾老年人成了一个社会问题，所以科学家发明了一种家用机器人。请以"TheRobotintheFuture"为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍这种机器人。注意：1 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2 .书写规范，语法正确，语句通顺。答案TheRobotintheFutureAsyouknow,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,peoplehavetofacevariouspressure.TheYdon'thaveenoughtimetoattendtotheOIdinthnirfamily、WhiChhasbecomeaSCCiaIproblem.ToSoIVethisproblem,SCientiStShaveinventedahouseholdrobot,WhiChisdesignedtotakeCareOftheold.Itcancookmealsatafixedtimewhichcanbeadjustedaccordingtoindividualneeds.Itcanalsoaccompanytheoldinhavingachat,playingchessanddoingexercise.Moreover,itcandealwithemergencies.FOrexample,ifanOIdmanfallsi11suddenly,therobotWinCallforhelpimmediately.【解析】【思路点拨】题目要求写一份短文介绍这种机器人。写作内容应该扣题，不可偏离题意。所列提示要写全面，正确运用时态与语态，根据题目提示可知，本文应该用第三人称，时态为一般现在时。适当运用一些高级词汇和句型使文章更丰富。【亮点词汇】Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy随着经济的发展attendto照顾bedesignedtodo被设计做某事©atafixedtime在固定时间【高分句型】（T）Theydon'thaveenoughtimetoattendtotheoldintheirfamily,whichhasbecomeasocialproblem.（which弓导的非限制性定语从句）TOsolvethisproblem,scientistshaveinventedahouseholdrobot,whichisdesignedtotakecareoftheold.（不定式作目的状语；WhiCh引导的非限制性定语从句）FOrexample,ifanoldmanfallsillsuddenly,therobotwillcallforhelpimmediately.（if引导的条件状语从句）【结构布局】引言：引出社会问题中心：介绍机器人的功能结尾：介绍机器人可以呼救帮助【拓展词汇】PIayanincreasinglyimportantpanin在中起越来越重要的作用makegooduseOf充分利用beaddictedtodoingsth.沉溺于做某事【拓展句型】®Itremainsaquestionhowwecansolvetheproblemsconcerningmakingfriendsonline.（如何解决网上交友所产生的问题依然是个难题。）WhilezThOUgh/Althoughamobilephonecanhelpusgetrelaxed,withoutitwecanbemoredevotedtoourStUdieS.（尽管手机能帮我们放松，但没有手机我们更能专心学习。）MobiIepaymentisthemostpopularinChina,whichhasmadepeople'sdailylifemoreandmoreconvenient.（移动支付在中国最受欢迎，已经使得人们的日常生活越来越方便。）5.最近你们学校的英语报正在征集稿件，请你以“如何安全上网”为话题写一篇稿件向其投稿。注意：词数80左右。答案WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternet,agrowingnumberofpeoplearefondofchattingonline.ThenhowdoyoustaysafeonlineandavoidbadexperiencesontheInternet?Firstofall,youShOUIdPrOteCtyourDrivaCyandDreVentidentityIheftWhiChmeansIhalyouarenotallowedK）giveOUtYoUraddressandDhOnenumber.Second,bepolite.YoUShoUIdn'tDOStanCommentSthatmastirIlVIrOUbIeonline.Inaword,let'sworktogethertocreateacivilizednetworkatmosphere.【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇说明文写作，目的要求学生学会安全上网。首先需要交代一下写作背景，结合现状了解存在哪些问题，然后针对问题提出几点建议如何安全上网。全文可采用第二人称来写，适当运用一些高分词汇和高分句型，使文章更加丰富且行文连贯。【亮点词汇】giveout泄露anumberof大量的inaword总而言之StirUP引起；激起【高分句型】®Youshouldprotectyourprivacyandpreventidentitytheft,whichmeansthatyouarenotallowedtogiveoutyouraddressandphonenumber,（which引导非限制性定语从句；Ihal引导宾语从句）YoUshouldn'tpostanycommentsthatmaystiruptroubleonline,（that弓I导定语从句）【结构布局】引言：交代写作背景中心：提出建议结尾：总结话题【拓展词汇】beaddictedtodoingsth.沉溺于做某事havegood/bad/positive/negativeeffectson对有好的/坏的/积极的/消极的影响©scientifically科学地【拓展句型】ItremainsaquestionhowwecansolvetheproblemsconcerningmakingfriendsOnline.如何解决网上交友所产生的问题依然是个难题。©Thereisnodoubtthatmodernscienceandtechnologybringusconvenienceandcomfortinlife.毫无疑问现代科学技术给我们的生活带来了便捷和舒适。6.假定你是校学生会主席李华。为了鼓励学生的创造性思维，你校将于下周日在操场举办“科技小发明展”。请你写一封邮件邀请你校交换生JaCk来参观并为他介绍这个展览。参考词汇：科技小发明technologygadgets注意：(D词数80左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】DearJack,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoanexhibitionoftechnologygadgetstobeheldinourschoolnextSunday.Theexhibitionisscheduledtotakeplaceontheschoolplaygroundfrom8:30amto11:30am.Itspurposeistoencouragestudentstothinkcreatively.COlnthisexhibition.WCCaKCnioyvariousgadgetswhichareOfreatUSVinOUrdaiIylif.What,smore,somestudentswillintroducetheirgadgets'functionsonthespot.®wouldappreciateitifyouCoUldioininIheexhibition.1.kingforwardtoyourreplyandexpectingyourcoming.Yours,1.iHua【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇邀请类的应用文。话题为邀请你校交换生JaCk下周日来参观学校举办的“科技小发明”展览，并为他介绍这个展览。要点提示已给出，动笔前应明确写作要点，不能遗漏，并对要点做适当的思路拓展，以充实文章内容。写作时，要注意词汇的使用和句式的选择。【亮点词汇】bescheduledto预计，安排takeplace举行，发生CreatiVeIy创造性地OntheSPot当场，在现场【高分句型】Inthisexhibition,wecanenjoyvariousgadgetswhichareofgreatuseinourdailylife,（which引导的定语从句）IwouldappreciateitifyouCouldjoinintheexhibition,（if引导的条件状语从句）【结构布局】引言：说明活动并发出邀请；中心：介绍活动具体内容；结尾：期待对方接受邀请。【拓展词汇】PriVileged感到荣幸的；COnfirmone'sparticipation确认参加；informsb.ofsth.告诉某人某事【拓展句型】mconvincedthatyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChineseculturethroughtheactivity.（我相信通过这项活动你会对中国文化有个更好的了解。）NOlonlydoestheactivityarousestudents'interestinreading,butitalsocultivatesstudents'loveforknowledge.（活动不仅激发了学生的阅读兴趣，而且培养了学生对知识的热爱。）