大题预测 08读后续写训练 （解析版）.docx

大题08读后续写训练（建议用时：30分钟/篇满分：25分）第四部分第二节读后续写（共15大题，每题25分;）Passage1（2024广东茂名统考一模）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Mom,I'mreadytogo,McalledJason.EverySaturday,JasonlookedforwardtogoingtoChinatowntoshopforfdbecausehismomlethimpickhisfavoritesnacks:roastporkbunsandbubbletea.ThestreetsinChinatownwerecrowdedwithcarsandpedestrians.Hismothercouldnotfindthesameexoticvegetablesinthelocalsupermarkets,sotheyalwayscameheretoshop.WhatfascinatedJasonwastastyroastpork,eventhewholepigshangingonbighooksinthewindows,theirskinsroastedtoaglisteningbrown.Jason,smouthwouldwaterjustlookingatthem.AstheypassedthenewsstandcarryingChinesenewspapersandmagazines,Jasonspottedanoldmansittingonthesidewalk.Hishairwaslong,white,andmessy.Thefacebeneathwaslined,dirty,andunshaven.Frayedandtornclothingwrappedaroundhisthinframe,andinthiskindofcoldweather,heevenworesandals,hisfeetbluewithcold.Hebangedanemptycanagainstthesidewalk.AsJasonwalkedby,hecouldsmellamustyodorandpinchedhisnostrilstogether.TheoldmanreachedoutandtouchedJason,sleftleg.Instinctively,Jasongatheredallhisstrengthtojerk（猛拉）hislegawayandkicktheoldman'shandheavily.Frightened,hehurriedtocatchupwithhismotherwithoutlookingback.“Mom,theoldmantouchedme,“hecried,tlHetouchedmewithhisdirtyhands.It,sdisgusting!Andhesmelledtoo.”Jason,smotherglancedbackatthemanwithalookofunderstandingandsaidgently,44Jason,hecan,thelpit.He,shomeless.Hedidn,tmeananyharm.Mom,swordsmadeJasonlookbackattheoldmanwithregret,whonowwaslookingupatotherpassersby,stillbanginghiscan.Ontheirwayhome,Jasonasked,hisvoicefilledwithconcern.ttWhyisthatoldmanhomeless?Wheredoeshesleep?”“Idon,tknow.It,stoughtobehomeless,especiallyinthiscoldweather.Hedidlookquiteweak,“hismotherreplied.Mom,swordsmadeJason,sregretdeepened.Heconfessedhisheavykicktohismother,whoremindedhimthatitwascrucialtoacknowledgehismistakeandtrytomakeupforit.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,withhismother'shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.【答案】Thenextday,withhismother,shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.TheydrovetothefamiliarsidestreetinChinatownwithseveralpackagesofnecessities.Theoldmanwasstillthere,lookingevenskinnierthanIhedaybefore.HeglancedatJasonandseemedtorecognizehim.Jasonopenedhispackagesandhandedtheoldmanapairofshoesandsomeclothes.Hcsaidgentlytotheman,fcihopetheyAndthenhetookapackageofroastporkfromhismom.Eagerlyslippingittotheoldman,shand,heSaidj'It'salsoforyou.”Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.Heboweddeeply,whispering44Thankyou!inatremblingvoice.Jasonhelpedhimputonthenewshoesandclothes.Surprisingly,Jasondidn,tthinkofthemanassmellybutsomeoneworthyofrespectandcareatthismoment.Whentheoldmanwaswolfingdowntheroastpork,hiseyesmistedoveronceagain,ti,msorryforthatkick,“Jasonapologizedsincerely.Touchedbytheman,sgratitude,Jasonunderstoodthatitwasnevertoolatetomakeupforapastmistake,nomatterhowlateitmightseem.【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。Jason和妈妈每周六都会去唐人街购物，那里有他喜欢的零食。次，当他经过个卖报刊的摊位时，一个脏兮兮的老流浪汉碰了他的腿，他本能地脚踢开了老人。然而当他告诉妈妈时，妈妈却对他解释说这位老人无家可归，他并没有恶意。Jason为自己的行为感到抱歉，决定为他做点事情。第二天在妈妈的帮助下，他带着一些必需品来看望老人，还给了他一双鞋和一些衣服。老人非常感激。JaSon也真诚地向老人致歉，他也意识到弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚。【详解】1.续写线索：由续写第一段首句“第二天，在母亲的帮助下，JaSOn决定做点什么。”可知，第一段可以描写JaSon在妈妈的帮助下给老人带来了一些必需品，还给老人一双鞋子和一些衣服。由续写第二段首句“听了这话,老人眼含热泪地看着他们。''可知,第二段可以描写老人感动的言语和行为，以及Jason为自己的行为道歉，他也意识到弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚。2 .段落续写：JaSon决定做点什么一他和妈妈带着必需品来唐人街找这位老人一老人感激地收下了东西-Jason真诚地向老人致歉他明白了弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚3 .词汇激活：行为类瞥一眼：glanceat/takeaglanceat认出：recognize/identify弥补：makeupfbr/compensatefor情绪类令人惊讶地：SurprisingIyZinsurprise/toone,ssurprise感动的：touched/moved感激：gratitude/thankfulness【点睛】【高分句型1Theoldmanwasstillthere,lookingevenskinnierthanthedaybefore4使用了现在分词作状语、比较级结构）高分句型2Touchedbytheman'sgratitude,Jasonunderstoodthatitwasnevertoolatetomakeupforapastmistake,nomatterhowlateitmightSeem.（使用了that引导宾语从句、itiswas+时.+todosth.结构、too.to.结构、nomatterhow引导让步状语从句）Passage2（2024.广东.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。Doraisaseven-year-oldgirl.Oneday,whenshevisitedherfriendAlice,shesawabeautifulbirdinacageonthebalconyofthehouse.Alicetoldheritwashernewpet.uHowbeautifulitis!,Dorasaid.uIalsowanttohavesuchabirdasmypet.”ThatdaywhenDorareturnedhome,shetoldhermotheraboutAlice'sbird.Thensheasked,Mom,canIalsogetabird?”"Ofcourse,youCanJhermotherreplied."Butyouneedtowaitbecausevenotimetogotoapetstorethesedays."Doraagreed.Oneday,whenDorawasbackhomefromschool,shesawacageinthelivingroom.Inthecagewasabeautifulbluebird.Hermotherwasstandingnexttothecage,smiling."Oh,abird!”Dorashoutedhappily.Sherantoitandlookedatithappily.44It,sabirthdaygiftforyou,“hermothersaid.44Thankyou,Mom.Iloveitsomuch!”Dorashoutedexcitedly.Thefollowingday,Dorainvitedherfriendstocomeovertoseeherbird.AllofherfriendssaiditwasareallybeautifulbirdandDorawasverygladtohearthat.Sheandherfriendsplayedwiththebirdforalongtimethatday.Herfriendsallwishedtheycouldhavesuchabirdastheirpet.Sadly,afewweekslater,Dorabecamesick.Thedoctortoldherparentsthatshegotthefluandhadtostayathome.Inordernottomakeherfriendssick,herparentsaskedherfriendsnottocometoplaywithher.Dorafeltverysad.Howshewishedherfriendswouldcomeandvisither!Butsheknewherparentswereright.She,dbetterstayalone.SinceDorahadnoonetoplaywith,shecouldonlyplaywithherbird.However,shefeltthatherbirddidn,tseemtobehappyeither.Paragraph1:Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Paragraph2:Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.【答案】Paragraph1:Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Shefoundherbirdkeptlookingoutofthewindow.Inthetreesoutside,manybirdswereplayinggladly.Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn,tlikebeingkeptinthecageatall,justasshehopedtostaywithherfriends.Beforeshegotsick,shedidn'tthinkalotaboutherbird.Now,Dorarealizedsheshouldn'tselfishlytakeawayitsfreedomforherownenjoyment.Paragraph2:Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.Shesaid,4tMom,canyousetmybirdfree?Hermotherwassurprisedandaskedwhy.ttmsureitalsowantsfriends,Dorasaid.Hermotheragreed.Sheopenedthecageandthebirdcheerfullyflewoutofthewindow.Afewdayslater,Doracouldplaywithherfriendsagain.Howexcitedshewas!Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthatmoment.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了七岁女孩DOra收到了一只鸟作为生H礼物，她邀请朋友来看这只鸟，所有的朋友都说很漂亮，DOra非常开心，不幸的是，几周后Dora生病了，为了不传染给朋友，父母要求她在家待着，Dora感到很难过，只能和小鸟玩，但她发现小鸟似乎也不快乐。【详解】1.段落续写：由第段首句内容“Dora默默地看着她的小鸟。”可知，第段可描写Dora看到鸟玩耍的场景意识到小鸟也需要自由。由第二段首句内容“妈妈进来后，DOra把自己的决定告诉了妈妈。“可知，第二段可描写Dora将小鸟放生及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。2 .续写线索：发现小鸟往窗外看意识到小鸟需要自由一告诉妈妈自己的决定放生感悟3 .词汇激活行为类生病：getsick/fallill询问：ask/inquire同意：agree/approve情绪类高兴：gladly/dclightcdly惊讶：SurprisedZastonished【点睹M高分句型1Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn'tHkebeingkeptinthecageatall.（运用了由连词that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.（运用了由从属连词when弓导的时间状语从句）高分句型3Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthatmoment.（运用了由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句）Passage3（2024福建漳州统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmytenthbirthday-doubledigitswhichwouldbeabigdayforme,andIwouldhavethebiggestpartyever.Theguestlist,whichIkeptatthebackofmyhomeworkassignmentfolder,beganwithafewclosefriends.ButinthetwoweeksbeforethatspecialFridaynight,ithadquicklygrownfromsevengirlstoalargetotalofseventeen.Nearlyeverygirlinmyfifth-gradeclasshadbeeninvitedtosleepoveratmyhouseforabigcelebration.IwasespeciallyhappywheneachguestIinvitedexcitedlyacceptedtheinvitation.Icouldn,twait!Itwouldbeanightofscarystories,funnygames,pizzaandlotsofpresents,whichwouldbeahappyparadise（天堂）forkids.Whocouldresistit?ButasIlaterrealized,IwouldtrulytreasureonlyonegiftIreceivedthatnight.Thebignightfinallycame.Everyfriendinvitedcametomyhouseontime.Wekeptdancing,singing,talkingloudlyandplayingallpopgames.Asyoucouldimagine,myfamilyroomwasfullofcrazyshoutsandburstsoflaughter.WehadjustfinishedagameOfTwisterandwereliningupforthelimbo（林波舞）whenthedoorbellrangsuddenly.Ihardlypaidattentiontowhomightbeatthedoor.Whatdiditmatter?Whocared?EveryoneIlikedfromschoolwasthere,inmyfamilyroom,preparingforthegametoleanunderthestickheldbymytwosisters.44Judy,comehereforaminute,Momansweredthedoorandcalledloudlyfromthefrontdoor.Ihatedtobeinterrupted.Irolledmyeyesandshruggedtomyfriendsasiftosay,“Nowwhowoulddarebothermeatatimelikethis7,WhatIreallywantedtosayWaS,"It'stoughbeingpopular!m注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:/rantothefrontdoortwonderingwhoitwas,andthen/stopped.Paragraph2:/slowlyacceptedthegiftfromSarah.【答案】ParagraphI:/rantothefrontdoor,wonderingwhoitwas,andthenIstopped.MymouthdroppedopenandIfeltmyfaceturningred.TherestoodSarah,thequietgirlwhosatnexttomeinmusicclass.Shewasholdingagift,uHappybirthdayIaskedmyselfinsilence,4tHowhadIforgottentoinviteSarah?”IrememberedthatIonlyaddedanameto(helistwhensomeonehadshownaninterestinme.ButSarahhadneverdonethat.Neveroncehadsheaskedmeaboutmybirthdayparty.Paragraph2:/slowlyacceptedthegiftfromSarah./askedhertojointheparty.Ican,tstay/'shesaid.4*Mydad'swaitinginthecar."1nearlybeggedforherstay.44Thanks,butIhavetogo,“shesaid,turningtowardthedoor.ttSeeyouonMonday."Istoodtherewithanemptyfeelinginmyheart.HoldingSarah,sgiftinmyhands,IthoughtitwasthebestgiftIhadreceived,foritwasgivenbyanunconditionalfriendwhostoodbyme,alwaysencouragingandunderstandingme.【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在十岁生日的时候举行了一个盛大的生日聚会，她儿乎邀请了班上的所有女生。她们正在狂欢的时候，门铃响了，原来是Sarah带着礼物来祝贺作者的生日。作者并没有邀请她，然而她却带着礼物来了，这让作者很感动，作者认为Sarah送的礼物是最好的礼物。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我跑到前门，想知道是谁，然后我停了下来。“可知，第一段可描写来着是谁以及做了什么。由第二段首句内容“我慢慢地接受了Sarah的礼物。”可知，第二段可描写作者邀请Sarah参加聚会，Sarah因为有事拒绝了以及作者的感受。2.续写线索：Sarah拿着礼物站在门口一作者反思邀请Sarah参加聚会Sarah有事拒绝感悟3.词汇激活行为类拿着：holcl/carry对感兴趣：showaninterestin/beinterestedin参加：join/PartieiPatein情绪类空虚的：empty/vacant鼓舞人心的：encouraginginspiring【点睛】高分句型1TherestoodSarah,thequietgirlwhosatnexttomeinmusicclass.（运用了完全倒装,who引导定语从句）高分句型2IrememberedthatIonlyaddedanametothelistwhensomeonehadshownaninterestinme.（运用了that引导宾语从句，When引导时间状语从句）Passage4（2024.湖南岳阳.统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Bytheageofsixteenyearsold,Benhadalwaysbeenanoutstandingstudent.Hewenttogreatlengthstoachievehighgradesandmanagedtokeephisparentsdelightedandproud.NeitherofhisparentshadtheopportunitytoattenduniversityanditwastheirbiggestambitionthatBencouldlandawell-paidanddecentjobasalawyer.Hcknewthatachievingthisgoalwouldmakehisparentswalkonair,buthewasn'tcertainwhetherhewouldfeelthesame.Sincehewasonlyachild,Benhadbeenpassionateaboutcomputerprogramming.Hetaughthimselfhowtouseacomputer,andbytheageof12,hehadbeenproficientinthreedifterentprogramminglanguages.Hedidallofthisinhissparetime.Hewasquiteanintrovert（内向的人）,sohepreferredstayinginwithhiscomputer,ratherthangoingoutsocializingwithhisfellowclassmatesorplayingsportsinthebrilliantsunshine.Itwasacceptablewithhisparents,aslongashecontinuedtofocusonhisstudies.Oneday,whilereadinganarticleonlineaboutayoungtechnologybillionairecalledTom,BenwasfascinatedbythemagicalpoweroftechnologyandthewisdomandimnovationoftheyoungCEO.Theinnervoicetoldhimthathelongedtobecomeacomputerprogrammer.EverythingchangedforBen.Inthearticle,theCEOsaidthathiscompanywastryingtocreateanewandimprovedwayofpayingforgoodsonlinebutthattheywerestrugglingwiththesecuritysystem.Hesaidiftheycouldovercomethis,theycouldlaunchthebiggestandbestonlinepaymentsystemintheworld.ItoccurredtoBenthathehadaninnovativeideaonhowtohandlethisproblem.Thinkingthatitwouldn'tcometoanything,heemailedtheCEO,introducinghimselfandexplaininghisidea.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Heforgotallaboutit,butthenamonthlater;themostamazingthinghappened.Withalltheseconcernsinmind,Bendeterminedtocommunicatewithhispar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.续写线索：写邮件认可受到邀请担心和父母坦白没有责怪鼓励追求梦想3 .词汇激活行为类拒绝：turndown/refuse陪伴某人：accompanysb./pany抓住机会：seizetheOpportunityZgrasp（hechance情绪类非常高兴：OverjoyedZextrcmelyhappy吃惊的：surprised/shocked【点睛】【高分句型1HereceivedaresponsedirectlyfromtheCEO,whichinformedhimthathisbrilliantideastruckachordandthathewaswelcometoflytoAmericatosharehisforwardthinkingonthesecuritysystem.（由which引导非限定性定语从句,that引导宾语从句）高分句型2Instead,heguaranteedthathecoulddosomethingbrilliantinacareerasacomputerprogrammer.（由that引导了宾语从句）Passage5（2024广东佛山统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Astheafternoonsunbathedthelocalbeachwithitswarm,goldenrays,four-year-oldWilliamsatonthebeachwithamixofexpectationandconfision.Hisdad,Steven,satbyhisside.TheywerewaitingforWilliam'sfriendstoarriveandcelebratehislong-awaitedbirthdayparty.William,swideeyes,filledwithhopeandhappiness,staredattheshoreline,lookingibrfamiliarfaces.Hekeptaskinghisdadwhereeveryonewas,andStevenjusttoldhim44they,recomingSoon,“tryingtoeasehisson'sgrowingimpatience.Butthelongertheywaited,themorehopelessWilliambecame.Hewasextremelydisappointedwhenthetwoinvitedfamiliescalledandsaidtheycouldn'tmakeittothecelebrationbecauseofunexpectedsituations.Stevenwatchedhisson,whohadbeeneagerlyexpectinghisspecialdayforwhatseemedlikeages.Thisyear,Williamhadbeenmoreawarethaneverofhisupcomingbirthday,askingthroughoutthemonthwhenhisbirthdaywas,eagerlyexpectingagoodtime.Feelingasenseofguiltforhisson,sdisappointment,Stevendecidedtoturntosocialmediaforhelp.HepostedalovelypictureofhimandWilliamonthebeach.Theirfaceswerefilledwithamixofhopeanddisappointment.Thesincerewordswiththepictureread,44Williamwouldlovesomefriendstoplaywithonthebeach.Tbcelebratehisfourthbirthday,hehasHotWheels,sandtoys,dinosaurs,andwehavesomesnacksanddrinks.Anyandallwelcome.,William,swishforcompanionshipproducedastrongresponsefromthelocalpeople.Theyfloodedthepostwithmessagesofsupport,birthdaywishes,andofferstojointhecelebration.TheyweredeterminedtomakeWilliam'sdayspecial.44Goingthere.Seeyousoon,onewarm-hear