读后续写：偷偷打工 讲义+课件(亲情、自我成长)Word版.docx

读后续写：愉愉打工Mymothereyedmewithsuspicion.Idarednotlookather.KnowingthatIwaslatefromschoolfivedayscontinuously,Icouldnotofferanacceptableexplanation.IknewshedidnotbelievethatIhadextraclasseseverydayandarrivedhomeafter5pm.However,realizingshehadlittlechoicebuttobelieveinme,shetoldmethatdinnerwasintherefrigerator.Shehadtorushforhernightshiftatthelocalclinic.EversinceWelostourdadinanaccident,mymotherbecamethebreadwinner.Iwastheeldestamongthefoursiblingsanditfelluponmyshouldertoensurethattheycouldbecomeresponsibleadults.Besideshelpingmotherwiththehousework,Iregularlycoachedthemintheirstudies.Thankfully,neveroncehadIhadtoraisemyvoiceorforcethemtocompletetheirhomework.Butallofusmisseddadverymuch.Hewasamodelfatherandhusband.1.ifewascruellytakenawayfromhimataveryyoungageof42.However,mymothermanagedtopullthroughandfoundajobattheclinic.Itwasverytoughonsomeonelikeherwhohadneverworkedbeforeinherlife.Butmoneywasscarceandtherewerefivemouthstofeed.Daddidnotleavemuchbehind.Heneversuspectedhewoulddiesoyoung.Westoppeddiningoutandhadourmealsmostlyathome.Webasicallylivedfromhandtomouth.That,swhenitdawnedonmethatIhadtodomypartforthefamily.IknewmotherwouldnotagreebutIthrewcautionoutofthewindowandmanagedtogetapart-timejobatafast-foodrestaurant.IworkedthreehoursadayandmanagedtobringhomemoneysothatmysiblingsandIcouldgooutforoccasionalmoviesormeals.Iwassurethatmothersuspectedsomething.Butshecouldnotquitepointthefiguretothesourceofhersuspicion.ParkOneday,whileIWaSbusyservingthecustomers,IWCISSh（）CkedtoSeemotherStandingOi）DoSitetheCOUmerPar2:Mofhermade超Sitdown.SheWaSCdreadYCrV次，SoWe屋加）'siblings.情节设计：范文:ParPar1:Oneday,while/卬asSVServingIheCM$1Omers,/WasShoCkedioSeem"herslandinaODDOSiletheC妈妈没说什么就先离开了一我情绪复杂一下班后回到家，看到家人都在Pg2:MOthermademeSitdown.SheWaSalreadcrying、SOWeWmySibli峰.我为自己的隐瞒而道歉-妈妈感谢，并希望我平衡学业一兄弟姐妹也承诺帮忙家务-家人敞开心扉，感动 Nevertheless,mother,sresponsestartledme.Inherwords,shewasappreciativeofmydedication,withtheexpectationthatIcouldbalancemyWOrkalKiStudy.然而，妈妈的回应震惊了我。用她的话来说，她感激我的付出，希望我可以平衡好工作和生活。 Andmysiblingspromisedtobecommittedtostudyandhousework.我的兄弟姐妹承诺会好好学习和做家务。 Withallourhandsclutchedinmother,s,tearsturnedintogrins.我们的手被妈妈紧紧握住，眼泪变成了笑容。最终自测：Oneday,WhiIe/WaSbusyservingthecustomers,/WaSShOCkedtoSeeInotherStQndingODDoSitetheCoIUQter.看到妈妈惊讶的表情的同时，我也看到她热泪盈眶。似乎她张嘴想说什么，但没有，只是转身离开，消失在人群中。随后，我搞砸了顾客的订单，焦虑地想着怎样给出一个合理的解释。最终，我决定说出真相。快餐店一到关门时间，我就快步走回家。当我推开门，我看到妈妈和我的三个兄弟姐妹都在，坐在桌前。MOihermademeSitdow几.SheVVaSCdreadYCryiSoweremysiblings.我再也控制不住情绪，泪水夺眶而出，夹杂着羞愧和悔恨。“请原谅我隐瞒兼职工作的事情。我只是想要为家庭尽一份力。”我啜泣道。然而，妈妈的回应震惊了我。用她的话来说，她感激我的付出，希望我可以平衡好工作和生活。我的兄弟姐妹承诺会好好学习和做家务。我们的手被妈妈紧紧握住，眼泪变成了笑容。语料默写：1 .看到某人惊讶的表情2 .热泪盈眶3 .张嘴似乎想说什么4 .转身、离开5 .消失在人群中6 .搞砸了顾客的订单7 .头脑中充满了焦虑关于.8 .决定做某事9.就10 .快步走11 .推开门12 .控制不住情绪13 .泪水夺眶而出14 .夹杂着羞愧和悔恨15 .原谅某人做了某事16 .隐瞒关于的事17 .为家庭尽一份力18 .用她的话来说19 .感激我的付出20 .带着.的希望21 .平衡好工作和生活22 .我们的手被妈妈紧紧握住，眼泪变成了笑容。1:Oneday,WhiIeIbusySerVingthecustomers,I卬asShoCkedtoSeemotherStClndingOPPOSitetheCOImter.TheinstantIcapturedtheastonishedlookofmymother,Icouldseehereyesmoisturizingwithtears.Itseemedthatsheopenedhermouthinthehopeofsayingsomething,butshedidn,t,onlytoturnaroundandedgeaway,disappearingintotheCrOWd,看到妈妈惊讶的表情的同时，我也看到她热泪盈眶。她张嘴似乎想说什么，但没有，只是转身离开，消失在人群中。Subsequently,Iscrewedupcustomers1*9orders,withmymindfilledwithanxietyabouthowtoofferareasonableexplanation.Ultimately,Iwasresolvedtotellthetruth.随后，我搞砸了顾客的订单，头脑中充满了焦虑关于怎样给出一个合理的解释。最终，我决定说出真相。Scarcelyhadthefast-fbodrestaurant,sclosingtimecomewhenItrottedtowardshome.AsIpushedthedooropen,Isawmymotherandmythreesiblingsallin,seatedbythetable.快餐店一到关门时间，我就快步走回家。当我推开门，我看到妈妈和我的三个兄弟姐妹都在，坐在桌前。Para2:MothermademeSitdown.SheVVaSCIIreadyCryiSoWeremsiblings.Icouldn,tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmytearsbrimmedover,withamixtureofshameandremorseoverwhelmingme.Pleaseforgivemeforhidingthetruthaboutmypart-timejob.Ijustwanttodomypartforourfamily."ISobbed.我再也控制不住情绪，泪水夺眶而出，夹杂着羞愧和悔恨。“请原谅我隐瞒兼职工作的事情。我只是想要为家庭尽一份力J我啜泣道。