易错点16.书面表达(解析版).docx

易错点16.书面表达写人叙事类写作的突破策略【设题要素】1 .常采用给材料的形式，让学生描述或记叙某个人物或事件；2 .要求学生能够简短地发表自己的看法，或给予正确的评价；3 .一般有很大的自由度，学生可以充分发挥自己的想象，畅谈自己的看法。【突破必备】1 .主体要明确，结构要完整，句型要简练：2 .切勿漏掉六个要素，即五个“W”（who,when,where,what,Why）和一个“H”（how）;3 .时态、人称要分清；事件、线索要连贯；内容、思想要感人。【高分句式】Heistall/short.andhaslong/short/black/brown.hair.他很高/矮并且留着长长的/短的/黑色的/棕色的头发。Sheisinterestedin.她对感兴趣。He,ssokindthatwealllikehim.他那么友好，以至于我们都喜欢他。Heusedtobe/have.他过去常常是（有）We,reproudofhim/her.我们以他（她）为骄傲。He'sreadyIohelpothers.他乐于助人。veIeamtalotfromher/him.我已经从她/他那儿学到了很多。每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字，如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈XXX假如你是李华，请给你的英国笔友1.inda写一封电子邮件，介绍你心目中的一位英雄。注意：1 .信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹；2 .信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名；3 .80词左右（首段已给出，不计入总词数）。【参考范文】Dear1.inda,Howareyougettingon?mwritingthisemailtoshareastorywithyou.EverybodyhasaheroinhisorherheartandSodo1.Theheroinmheartismymother.MymotherisacommonworkerWhoWorkSinacompany.She'sverykindandfriendly.Shegetsonwellwitheveryonearoundher.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Once,ourneighborhadtoleaveforatrip,butnobodylookedafterherpetdog.Sheaskedifmymotherwoulddothisforher.MymotheragreedWiIhOUtthinkingtwice.mproudofher.vealsoIeamedalotfromher.IhopeICanfollowinherfo3steDs.Yours,1.iHua方法建议类写作的突破策略【设题要素】【高分句式】1.一般给出问题和材料，要求学生写dliketosharemyideaswithyou,我想与你分出解决方法或解决建议；享我的想法。2.话题侧重行为、学习、环保、安全Herearesomeofmysuggestions.这是我的一些及健康等方面；建议。3.一般要求以书信、邮件形式写作，Thebestwayto.isby最好的方法是学生可根据提示增加一些细节，适当通过.发挥。Tokeephealthy/safe,weshould.为了保持【突破必备】健康/安全，我们应当1.主体要明确，结构要完整，句型要Ifsone,sdutyto.1.efsstartfromtoday.简练；是某人的责任。让我们从今天开始吧。2.如果以书信、邮件形式呈现，必须Everyoneshouldplayapartindoingsth.人人都符合书信、邮件的基本格式；应当参与3.时态、人称要分清；方法、建议要Ihopemyadvice/suggestionsis/arehelpfultoyou.实用；观念、态度要真诚。我希望我的建议对你有帮助。假如你是李磊，你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进行回复。要求：1 .逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范；2 .词数：100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear1.i1.ei,Mysisterpracticesplayingtheviolininanafter-schoolclass,somyparentsaskedmetogoandIeamittoo.Butmjustnotamusicgirl.Youknow,minterestedinsportsandIwanttochoosewhatIlike.Now,msoupset.WhatshouldIdo?AnnaDearAnna,Iunderstandyourfeeling.HereiswhatIthink.IhopewhatIsaidishelpfultoyou.Yours,【参考范文】DearAnna,Iunderstandyourfeeling.HereiswhatIthink.Maybeyourparentswon'tknowhowyoufeelaboutit.Whynottalkwiththem?Youshouldtellyourparentsthatyoudon'twanttopracticeplayingtheviolinbecauseyouaren'tinterestedinmusic.Meanwhile,you,dbettertellthemyouareoldenoughtomakeyourowndecisions.Further-more,trytogetaproperchancetoprovethatyouareUdentedinsports.Onlythenwilltheyknowyoubetterandletyouchoosewhatyoulovetodo.msureyourparentswillunderstandyouandagreeWithYc)Urideas.IhopewhatIsaidishelpfultoyou.Yours,1.i1.ei计划梦想类写作的突破策略【设题要素】【高分句式】1.一般给出提示，让学生写出自己Iwanttobe.whenIgrowup.当我长大后，我想的计划或梦想；当一名2.要求学生描述将来某一阶段或某Sheplanstotravelaroundtheworld.她计划周游一活动的计划；谈论自己的梦想，给世界。出坚持该梦想的理由以及实现该梦Thesummerholidayiscomingtoanendandthe想将要做出的努力；newtermiscoming.3.学生可以充分发挥自己的想象，暑假即将结束，新的学期即将到来。适当发挥，增加文章内容。dliketohaveagoodrestandrelaxmyself.我想【突破必备】好好休息，放松一下自己。1.仔细研读提示及要求，切勿漏掉Hewantstoreadmorebookstoimprovehimself.要点；他想多读书来提升自己。2.适当增加要点；注意使用高级词Ihopemydreamcancometrueoneday.我希望我汇及句子；的梦想有一天会实现。3.注意人称及时态、语态的正确把Ithinkyou,llachieveyourdream.我认为你会实握。现你的梦想。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友1.iSa发来邮件，询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示，用英语给她写封回信。要求：1 .语言规范、语句通顺；2 .应包括图片所有要点，可适当发挥；3 .字数：100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。可能用到的词汇：the1stNationalCongressoftheCPC中共一大；PUbIiCiZe宣传；garbageclassification垃圾分类Dear1.isa,mgladtohearfromyou.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyholidayplan.Yours,1.iHuaBestwishes!【参考范文】Dear1.iSa,mgladtohearfromyou.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyholidayplan.First,Iwillhelpmymotherdochoresathome,suchassweepingthefloorandcleaningthewindows.Next,Iwilldosomevolunteerjobs.Iwillpublicizehowtodogarbageclassificationinmycommunity.Then,IwanttotraveltoIeammoreaboutChineseculture.IwillnolOnlYtraveltoShanghaitovisitthesiteofthe1stNationalCongressofCPCinShanghai,butalsovisittheSouth1.akeRedBoatinJiaxing,Zhejiang.1.astbutnotleast,Iwillir11DrovemSPokenEngliShbyjoiningEngliShclubs.Whataboutyourplan?1.ookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,1.iHua说明介绍类写作的突破策略【设题要素】1 .常采用提示或图表的形式，让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等；2 .要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述；3 .主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。【突破必备】1 .主体要明确，结构要完整，句型要简练：2 .合理运用说明方法：分析、分类、因果、举例、比较等；3 .时态、语态要分清；段落、内容要层次；单词、标点要正确。【高分句式】He/She/Itlookslike.他/她/它看起来像Ifs300meterslong/wide/high.它有300米长/宽/高。It,smadeofwood.它是由木材制成的。Withtherapidlygrowingpopularityof.随着的快速普及Arecentsurveysuggeststhat.最近的一项调查显示Chinaisagreatcountrywithalonghistory.中国是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家。我们国家历史悠久，地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民；有绿水青山，美丽的风景；有独特的美食，传统的饮食文化。请以“BeautifulChina”为题，写一篇作文，描写大美中国,表达我们对祖国的热爱。要求：1 .思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范；2 .文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息;3 .词数:80词左右的短文。BeautifulChinaYours,1.iHua【参考范文】BeautifulChinaChinaisagreatcountrywithalonghistory.ItliesintheeastofAsia.Ithasthelargestpopulationoftheworld.Itisbigandhasrichnaturalresources.Therearelotsofgreenmountainsandcleanwater.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.ItisfamousfortheGreatWallinmeworld.Thenaturalsceneryisfascinating.ThOUSandSOfforeignerscometoChinaforatripeveryyear.Ithasitsspecialfood,suchasBeijingDuck,Sichuanhotpotandsoon.They,reverydelicious.Therearelotsoftraditionaltablemannersaswell.Forexample,You,renotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.It,simpolitetopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.TheChinesepeoplearefriendlyandkind.They'rehavingahappylif.IloveChina.Itakeprideinourcountry.Ihopeourcountrywillbecomebetterandstrongerinthefuture.1. （2023浙江湖州统考中考真题）幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜，可以是帮助他人时的愉悦你觉得幸福是什么呢？请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，分享你的经历，谈谈你对幸福的理解。参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：achieve,share,havefun,bethankfulto注意：（1）词数：80-100；短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。Happinessiseverywherearoundus.【参考范文】Happinessiseverywherearoundus.Whenaskedwhathappinessis,manypeoplewillgivetheanswerlikemakingalotofmoneybecausemoneyandfamebringpeoplethegreatsenseofsatisfaction.But,inmyeyes,stayingwithmyfamiliesreallymakesmehappyforthesimpleandsincereloveamonguscanlastforeverthroughoutourlife.Inthesixthgradeofprimaryschool,Ihadahighfeverandhadtobehospitalizedfortwoweeks.Myfathersentmedeliciousfoodmadebymymotherandtalkedwithmeeveryday.Mylittlesister1.ucyoftencalledmeandcaredaboutmyhealth.WhenIwasawakeatnight,Ifoundmyfathersleepingonthechairbesidemybed,andIsuddenlythoughtthatstayingwithfamilieswasthebiggesthappinessandIwasthehappiestpersonintheworld.【写作分析】题材：本文是篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“般现在时和般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤第一步，讲述对幸福的理解；第二步，讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。亮点词汇thesenseof.的感觉haveto不得不Careabout关心高分句型Whenaskedwhathappinessis,manypeoplewillgivetheanswerlikemakingalotofmoneybecausemoneyandfamebringpeoplethegreatsenseofsatisfaction,（when弓导时间状语从句）2. （2023浙江衢州统考中考真题）善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“W?法Together,Enjoy为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行硬牢。TeamworkActivities takepartinaballmatch prepareforaparty cleantheclassroom makeaposter（海报） makeasurvey（调查） joininarelayrace（接力赛） dosocialpractice（社会实践） .注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；（2）词数：90HOo参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：teamwork（团队合作）workwith（与合作）teamspirit（团队精神）makeaneffortto（努力去）【参考范文】Teamworkisimportantforbothteenagersandadults.Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.Infact,itisalsoanimportantskillusedinallareasoflife.IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.Atfirst,IthoughtIcouldscoregoalsbymyself.Atlast,wefailedthisgamebecauseofarrogance.Afterthat,Irealizedthiswasateamsport.Ishouldworktogetherwithotherteammates.Allinall,teamworkcannotonlystrengthenChildrerrSsocialskills,butalsodeveloptheircommunicationskills.【写作分析】题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时“：提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；第二步，讲述自己的经历和从中学到了什么：第三步，总结概括。亮点词汇beimportantfor对重要infact事实上takePartin参力口allinall总的来说高分句型©Theabilitytoworktogetherwithothersaspartofateamisnotsimplyaskillneededatschool.（动词不定式作定语）IrememberedthatItookpartinafootballmatchlastmonth.（宾语从句）3. （2023浙江台州统考中考真题）假设你叫李辉，你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动，请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括如下：内容要点参考词汇Wherewillwego?HeheAncientStreettakethebusHowwillwegothere?,interview.Whatwillwedo?discusswaysofimproving.Whywillwegothere?IeammoreaboutWhenandwherewillwemeet?9:00a.m.Friday,theschoolgate注意：（1）邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；（3）词数80100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。To:Mr.SmithFrom:1.iHuiDearMr.Smith,Hovv,sitgoing?1.ookingforwardtoyourreply.【参考范文】DearMr.Smith,How,sitgoing?KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinourtriptoHeheAncientStreet.Wearegoingtherebybus.Whenwearrive,wewillinterviewtheoldpeople,hopingtheywilltellusstoriesaboutthepast.Thenweplantodiscusswaysofimprovingthetravelenvironmenttointerestmoretourists.TheseactivitieswillsurelyhelpusIeammoreaboutthehistoryoftheancientstreetandsensethebeautyofHeheCulture.Besides,itoffersusagoodchancetodocommunityservice.Wouldyouliketocome?Ifyes,pleasemeetusat9:00onFridaymorningattheschoolgate.1.ookingforwardtoyourreply.1.iHui【写作分析】题材：本文是一篇应用文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时“：提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。写作步骤第一步，开门见山，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义；第三步，期盼对方的回复。亮点词汇takepartin参加PIantodo计划做某事thebeautyof.的美丽©offerSbSth提供某人某物高分句型Whenwearrive,wewillinterviewtheoldpeople,hopingtheywilltellusstoriesaboutthepast.（非谓语作状语）Thenweplantodiscusswaysofimprovingthetravelenvironmenttointerestmoretourists.（动词不定式表目的）4. （2023浙江杭州统考中考真题）假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友JaCk的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。TO1.iPingSUBJECTCUsoon!Hi1.iPingNextweekllbewithyouinHangzhou.Ican,twait!It'sgoingtobesocool!Wecandolotsofexcitingthingstogether!1needtopackformytrip.Whatshould1bringwithme?Isthereaswimmingpoolortenniscenternearby?I,dliketogetyouagiftfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.JackHiJack,1.iPing【参考范文】HiJack,Iamsogladtoreceiveyouremail.Ican,twaittoseeyou,too.ItwillbeveryhotinHangzhounextweek,soyoushouldbringsomeT-shirtsandshortsaswellassomesunscreen.Thereisabigswimmingpoolnearmyhouse.Wecanswiminitforfree.Inaddition,thereisatenniscenterthreekilometersfrommyhome,sowecanalsogotoplaytennis.IlikeEnglishlocalproductsverymuch.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasebringmesome.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.1.iPing【写作分析】题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时“；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。I写作步骤第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心;第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。I亮点词汇can'waittodo迫不及待做aswellas和，以及100kforwardto期待而分句型IlwillbeveryhotinHangzhounextweek,soyoushouldbringsomeT-shirtsandshortsaswellassomesunscreen.（SO引导并列句）（2）Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasebringmesome.（if引导的条件状语从句）5. (2023浙江宁波统考三模)国家提出将''劳动教育(IabOredUCatiOn)”纳入了中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容提示：3.Yburfeelings:.1.aboreducation1.Youropinions:healthy;relax.4.Yburideasforschool:offerlaborclasses;holdcompetitions.2.Yburexperiences:athomedothedishes;atschoolcleantheclassroom.注意：(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数80-100。【参考范文】1.aboreducationisnecessary.Becauseit,sgoodforourhealth.Wccanrelaxbydoinglabor.Iusuallydolaborathomesuchasdoingthedishesandsweepingthefloor.AtschoolIoftencleantheclassroomandwaterflowers.Icannotonlykeephealthy,butalsodevelopgoodhabitsfromit.Asforhowtorunthecourse,Ihavemyideas.Theschoolcanofferdifferentkindsoflaborclassestoteachushowtogrowplants.What,smore,itcanholdcompetitionsaboutthelaborskills.Suchactivitiesmakeourschoollifemorecolorful.IbelieveIwilldowellinit.【写作分析】题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时“；提示：根据所给的要点提示写作，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明态度一劳动教育是必要的；第二步，介绍自己的劳动经历；第三步，就学校的课程设立，发表自己的观点；第四步，结语。亮点词汇JSUehas比如dothedishes洗餐具notonly.butalso不仅而且®asfor至于©differentkindsof不同种类的高分句型Theschoolcanofferdifferentkindsoflaborclassestoteachushowtogrowplants（"疑问词+不定式''作宾语）IbelieveIwilldowellinit.（that引导的宾语从句）6. （2023浙江温州校考三模）中国文化博大精深，学习中国文化具有重要意义。CambridgeInternaUonaISchool计划开设中国文化特色课，为此，该校以“MyfavouriteChineseCUlmreClaSS”为主题对全校学生开展了问卷调查。假设你是该校学生，请结合以下图表简述调查结果，选择你最喜欢的一节文化特色课且说明理由，并针对你的选择提出至少两项课堂活动的建议。MyFavouriteChineseCultureClass要求：不能出现真实的个人信息；字数不少于IIO词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Recently,asurveyonstudents,favouriteChinesecultureclasswasdoneinourschool.【参考范文】Recently,asun,eyonstudents*favouriteChinesecultureclasswasdoneinourschool.Asit,sshowninthegraph,42%ofthestudentschooseChinesemusicclassastheirfavourites.33%ofthestudentsliketolearnaboutChinesefestivalsand21%ofthestudentsarefansofChinesefoodculture.Therestofthestudentshaveotherchoices.IwanttoIeamaboutChinesemusicbestbecauseIenjoythesoundsofChineseinstrumentsverymuch.Ithinkit,sagoodideatoIeamsomeknowledgeaboutChineseinstruments.Moreover,IhopestudentscanhavechancestosingalongwithsomeChinesetraditionalsongs.Itmustbeinteresting!Inshort,IdohopeourschoolcanprovidecolorfulChinesecultureclassessothatwecansensethebeautyofChineseculture.【写作分析】题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时“；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，根据表格的内容介绍学生们选择的课程；第二步，分享自己选择的课程以及原因；第三步，总结概括。亮点词汇asurveyOn对的调查Iearnabout了解inshort简而言之高分句型lwanttoIeamaboutChinesemusicbestbecauseIenjoythesoundsofChineseinstrumentsverymuch,（because引导原因状语从句）Inshort,IdohopeourschoolcanprovidecolorfulChinesecultureclassessothatwecansensethebeautyofChineseculture.（sothat引导目的状语从句）7. （2023浙江嘉兴统考二模）假如你是李华，你校英语报正在征集上周五研学活动（StUdytOUr）的文章。请根据表格中的信息写一篇研学小记，并向校英语报投稿。StudytourTimePlacesActivitiesBenefitsmorHistoryIeamaboutancientmeaningful;ningMuseumcoinsincreaseone,sknowledge;afternoonAnimalFarmfeedtheanimals注意：1.短文必须包含表中你参加研学活动的所有信息，并适当发挥：2 .文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息：3 .词数：80100o短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。1.astFriday,ourclasswentonastudytour.【参考范文】1.astFriday,ourclasswentonastudytour.Wewenttherebybusinthemorning.Whenwegotthere,wevisitedtheHistoryMuseumfirst.WeIeamtaboutancientcoinsafterseeingmanypicturesandthings.Afterlunch,wevisitedAnimalFarm.Wefedtheanimalsthere.Intheevening,wehadapartyandenjoyedourselves.Ithinktheschooltripisreallymeaningfulforus.Wecannotonlyrelaxourselvesbutalsoincreaseourknowledge.【写作分析】题材：本文为一篇研学小记，是应用文，介绍上周参加的研学活动；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：根据表格内容，介绍研学活动的时间、地点、内容以及意义。不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。写作步骤第一步，引入正题，即本文要介绍的研学活动；第二步，具体介绍研学活动。从“研学活动的时间、地点、内容等方面具体介绍研学活动;第三步，阐述研学活动的意义。亮点词汇JIeamabOUl知道；了解enjoyedoneself玩得愉快notOnIybutalso不仅而且高分句型WhenWegotthere,wevisitedtheHistoryMuseumfirst,（when引导时间状语从句）（2）1thinktheschooltripisreallymeaningfulforus.（宾语从句）8. （2023浙江湖州校联考三模）21世纪报近期举办英语征文比赛，其主题为创建和谐校园。假如你是李华，请你以“HowtoCreateaHarmoniousSchool”为题，根据下面表格内容用英语写一篇短文向该报纸投稿，谈谈你的看法。HowtoCreateaHarmoniousSchoolTeacherSBefriendlytothestudents,.ClassmGetonwel