托福作文写作范文详解ompet.docx

托福作文写作范文详解题目:Somepeoplethinkthatasenseofcompetitioninchildrenshouldbeencouraged.Othersbelievethatchildrenwhoaretaughttoco-operateratherthancompetebecomemoreusefuladults.话题和题型分类教育类；双边讨论题型题目分析竞争or合作思路提示A.竞争适应充满竞争的社会争取有限的社会资源树立战胜困难的信心B.合作培养团队精神适应工作任务需求提高团队协作能力SampleAnswerGrowingupinaworldwithanever-increasingpopulation,manychildrenaretaughttocompetewitheachotherfromtheirearliestmemorysoastosurpassothers.Althoughthispracticeisembracedbymanyzothersremainunconvincedofitsmerits.Theyinsistthatforchildrentoachievegreaterthingsintheiradulthoodtheyshouldlearnhowtoco-operatewithothers.PersonallyspeakingzIthinkitisbettertoteachchildrenhowtoco-operate,becauseintodayzssocietypeoplealwaysneedtoworkwithothers.（首段开篇摆明观点：双方都有各自的观点，但作者更偏向于教育孩子与他人合作）Thoseinfavourofthecompetitiveapproacharguethatcompetitionskillshavetobeinstilledintochildrenfromanearlyageiftheyaretosurviveintheirfuturelives.Indeed,fiercecompetitionstartsfromprimaryschoolwherestudentsvietogetbettergradesinordertoenteragoodmiddleschoolandtogetadmittedintoaprestigiousuniversitylateron.Thisisfollowedbyconstantpressuretooutshineone,Sco-workersifcareeradvancementistobeachieved.Moreover,insteadofbeinganunavoidablenuisance,competitionshouldbeembraced,foritisthedrivingforcebehindallprogress.Understandably,peopletendtoperformbetterwhentheystrivetobeattheiropponents,whichistheveryreasonwhymostathletesrunfasterincriticalracesthantheydointheirtraining.（文章第二段论述为什么要教育孩子学会竞争，竞争论据一：使孩子能在将来的生活中生存下来；竞争论据二：竞争使人进步）Ontheotherhand,opponentsofthisviewalsohavetheirreasons.Tobeginwithztosurviveandprosper,eitheratschoolorinsociety,co-operationisessential.Noonecansolelyrelyonhisorherowntalentstoachieveacademicsuccess.Infactzmanykeyfactorsthatcontributetoone,sscholasticachievementsuchastheinstructionfromteachersandtheexchangeofideaswithclassmatesrequireco-operationandinterpersonalskills.Theneedtoworkwithandassisteachotherisalsoreflectedineveryorganization,beitacompanyoralaboratory,whereteamworkisaprerequisiteformostjobseekers.Furthermore,ifchildrenaretaughthowtoworkwellwithothers,theyaremorelikelytoestablishapositiverapportwherevertheygo.Byhelpingeachothertowardthesamegoal,peoplecanformgenuinefriendships.（文章第三段论述为什么要教育孩子学会合作，合作论据一：在不同环境中，要取得成功都需要与他人合作。合作论据二：利于与他人建立积极的关系）Personally,Iencouragekidstoco-operatewitheachother.Inaworldwherepeoplehavebecomeincreasinglyinterdependent,itisimperativetoteachourchildrenhowtoworkwithratherthanagainsteachother.（全文总结，重申观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文的语言简洁明了，清晰地表达了作者的观点。本文中一系列连接词的用法，使得文章变得流畅连贯：although,indeed,moreover,ontheotherhand,tobeginwithzfurthermore,personally.ThoseinfavourofthecompetitiveapproacharguethatcompetitionskillshavetobeinstilledintochildrenfromanearlyageiftheyaretosurviveintheirfutureIiVeS.句型Thoseinfavourof.arguethat可用于在议论文中摆出论据。Ontheotherhand,opponentsofthisviewalsohavetheirreasons.句型Ontheotherhandz可用于在议论文中陈述观点。逻辑结构本文是典型的总分总结构的议论文。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段和第三段分别对两种观点进行论述，使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者重申自己的偏向。