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1、gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/47需藕聂遨豫循线鹭0-0-占墨巧忘CrrJI【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型1.题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的

2、丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。【满分技巧】（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；（2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主,其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：1 .把握短文关键值思和语言特点的能力；2 .语言运用的准确性和丰富性;3 .对语篇结构的把握能力；T学易试题碧工作室精心打造,4 .创造性思维能力。学检测训练（一）【新书面表达-续写作文】（2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题）阅读

3、下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger,scave.Therewerebonesofdeadanima

4、lsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.ThedeerraisedherVOiCeandshouted,Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.IshallC

5、aDtUre（捕捉）atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner.Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath.Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger.Whyareyourunni

6、ngingreatfear?thejackalasked.Thetigersaid,Myfriend,aDOWerfUIandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocapturealigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway.ThecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasaCOWard（懦夫）.Itsaid,Dontbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotoge

7、thertofindout.Butthetigersaid,Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou.Thejackalsaid,Trustme.Letusknot（才了结）ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleaveyou.Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowtheywalkedtowardsthecavetoget

8、her.Para.1Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Para.2Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim【参考范文】Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Sheagainraisedhervoice.Sheshoutedtowardsherchildrenstandinginsidethecave,Mydearchildren,Irequestedmyfriend,thecleverjackal,toc

9、aptureatigerIF.ZXXK.COMT学易试题碧工作室精心打造,forus.Nowlookthejackalhascapturedatigertorus.Hehastiedthetiger,stailtohistail.Thisistopreventthetigerfromescaping.Youwillsoonhavethetigerfordinner.Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.So,thetigerdecidedtoescapefromtheterribleanimalstandi

10、nginsidehiscave.Hestartedrunning.Heforgotaboutthejackal.Hedraggedthejackaloverrocksandthorns.Inthemadescapethejackalwascaughtbetweentworocks.Thetigerpulledwithallhismight.Histailgotcut.Thejackalwaskilledinthisincident.Thetail-lesstigerranawaytoanotherpartoftheforest.Thedeerandheryoungonesleftthetige

11、r,scave.Theyjoinedtheirherdsafely.Presenceofmindandintelligencecansaveonefromdangeroussituations.（二）【新版书面表达-读后续写】（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。44Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudilion（试奏）yesterday?Mytri11（颤音）shouldhavebeenbelter,don,tyouthink?”AbbieaskedMeIandclosedtheIidofherviolinc

12、asebeforeschool.Itsnobigdeal,Abbie,MelsaidastheyWaIkedoutthedoor.Meldidn,thavetimetoworryaboutherlittlesister,smood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Afterschool,sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedh

13、ertoIhemusicroom.Melthoughtshe,dprobablybein（hefirstviolins.MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.AbbieConcerlmaster.Abbiescreamed,“Ican,tbelieveit!,ttIcan,twaittotellMumandDad!”Abbierushedtowardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What?Therehadtobesomemistake.She,dfigureouttomorrow.WhenMelgotho

14、me,Abbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethere.MusicpouredfromAbbie,sbowlikewaterfromateapotpureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgood-reallygoodbutthatwasn,tthepointMrBensonmusthavemadeamistake,Melthought.Thenextmorning,Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage,Melsaid,“MrBenson,I

15、wanttotalktoyouabouttheOrCheSlra（管弦乐队）seats.”44YesyoumustbeProUdofyoursister,MrBensonsmiled.44Abbieisararestudent.IfshecontinuestoDraCtiCehardandgrowasamusician,shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe,lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”gZXXKCM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至

16、少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Melfrozeastherewasntanymix-up.Paragraph2:Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.【参考范文】Melfrozeastherewasn,tanymix-up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho,dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthroug

17、heffortsandshehadn,tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.EverydaywassofullthatshedidntalwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determinedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.Afterschool,MclfoundAbbieonabenchout

18、side,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAhbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,*4msoproudthatyou,reconcertmaster.msorryvebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.Abbiewassurprised.tiButyou,repopular,Mel.Yougetbeltergrades.Yourebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything/Melshookherhcad.vic

19、antmakeatrilllikeyoucan.”“Youcanifyoukeeppracticing.AbbiesmiledandaskedifMelwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.(三)【新书面表达-读后续写】(2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.HelivedinaViHageinthemountainswithhis学易试题碧工作室精心打造/wifeandtwoyoung

20、children,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithall(hechildreninthevillage.TheylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftenIoldthemStOrieSwhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge,thevillageinn.HespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaveryIaZyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofi

21、shingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.44Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldsay.Whydon,tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargumentRipwentfurtherthanusualint

22、hewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel(木桶)andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Aftertha,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarr

23、el.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paral:Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.Para2：Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.【参考范文】Comparedwithpapertowels,handdryershavemoreadvantages,wh

24、ichwillbenefitschoolinfourways.First,theyarecleanandhealthybecausebacteriacan,ttouchkids.Additionally,itcanhelpschoolsavemoney.Thirdly,ourbathroomcanbekeptcleanandneat.Besides,itcandryourhandsmoreeffectivelyifwetakelongertime.Therefore,schoolisadvisabletofixtheequipmentatonce.(66)（四）（山东省2020年普通高等学校招

25、生模拟卷）学易试题碧工作室精心打造/话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray（流浪）dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold

26、.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasm

27、allpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadpuloutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseetheliteone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsi

28、ckorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Ilookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealhyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,eve

29、ryoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguestitShallwekeephimwithus?Iquestionedmymom.1.ikeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Para.1：Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabroken

30、leg.4科内力利,让依西专引上不超帛!Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.【参考范文】DayspassedonandoneeveningwhenSpottyreturnedfromhislongwalk,heappearedveryexhausted.Hecametomyroomandsatnearme.ItwasthenthatIsawhishindlegwasinjuredandwasbleeding.Icalledoutmymotherandshequicklytiedabandagea

31、roundhislegandgavehimfoodtoeat.Iwasveryupset.Butthenextday,Spottywasuptohisusualpranksthoughhelimpedabit.AfterthisincidentmyrelationwithSpottybecamemoreintense.Ireallyadmiredhimalotforhiscourage.Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyh

32、eadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidntseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelongweek.Buttherewerenosignsofhim.

33、ThenonedaymyDadgottransferredtoMumbai.WeshiftedbacktoMumbai.WhatwouldhavehappenedtoSpotty?Wouldhehavedied?Theseweretheonlyquestionsinmymind,buttheyallremainedunansweredforever.（五）（2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）话题：Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。44Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudition（

34、试奏）yesterday?Mytri11（颤音）shouldhavebeenbetter,don,tyouthink?”AbbieaskedMelandclosedthelidofherviolincasebeforeschool.Itsnobigdeal,Abbie,MelsaidastheyWaIkedoutthedoor.Meldidnthavetimetoworryaboutherlittlesistersmood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Aftersch

35、ool,sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertothemusicroom.Melthoughtshedprobablybeinthefirstviolins.学易试题碧工作室精心打造/MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.AbbieConcertmaster.Abbiescreamed,“Ican,tbelieveit!Ican,twaittotellMumandDad!Abbierushedto

36、wardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What?Therehadtobesomenistake.She,dfigureouttomorrow.WhenMelgothome,Abbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethere.MusicpouredfromAbbie,sbowlikewaterfromateapot-pureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgoodreallygood-butthatwasntthepoint.ttMrBensonmust

37、havemadeamistake,Melthought.Thenextmorning,Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage,Melsaid,MrBenson,IwanttotalktoyouabouttheOrCheStra（管弦乐队）seats.”ttYesyoumustbeDrOUdofyoursister,MrBensonSmiIed.AbbieisarareStudentJfshecontinuestoDraCliCehardandgrowasamusician,shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe

38、,lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:MelfrozeasthereWaSnIanymix-up.Paragraph2:Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.【背诵范文】Melfrozeastherewasn,tanymix-up

39、.Sherealizedshewastheonewho,dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthrougheffortsandshehadn,tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.EverydaywassofullthatshedidntalwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determ

40、inedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.学易试题碧工作室精心打造/Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAbbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,t*msoproudthatyou,reconcertmaster.msorryvebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.Abbiewassurprised.4t

41、Butyou,repopular,Mel.Yougetbeltergrades.You,rebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything?Melshookherhead.Ican,tmakeatrilllikeyoucan.44Youcanifyoukeeppracticing.AbbiesmiledandaskedifMeiwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.（六）（2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）话题：农民RipVanWinkle的故事难度：建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整

42、的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.HelivedinaViHageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.TheylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftenIOldthemStorieSwhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeor

43、ge*,thevillageinn.HespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaveryIaZyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfiiends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.44Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldsay.“Whydon,tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”Afterargumen

44、tswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargumentRipwentfurtherthanusualinthewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel（木桶）andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoa

45、cave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Afterthat,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paral：IF.ZXXK.COM学易试题碧工作室精心打造/Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreein

46、thesamevalley.Para2:Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.【背诵范文】Comparedwithpapertowels,handdryershavemoreadvantages,whichwillbenefitschoolinfourways.First,theyarecleanandhealthybecausebacteriacanttouchkids.Additionally,itcanhelpschoolsavemoney.Thirdly,ourbathroomcanbekeptcleanandneat.Besides,itcandryourhandsmoreeffectivelyifwetakelongertime.Therefore,schoolisadvisabletofix(heequipmentatonce.(66)