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1、大题08读后续写训练（建议用时：30分钟/篇满分：25分）第四部分第二节读后续写（共15大题，每题25分;）Passage1（2024广东茂名统考一模）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Mom,Imreadytogo,McalledJason.EverySaturday,JasonlookedforwardtogoingtoChinatowntoshopforfdbecausehismomlethimpickhisfavoritesnacks:roastporkbunsandbubbletea.ThestreetsinChinatownwerecro

2、wdedwithcarsandpedestrians.Hismothercouldnotfindthesameexoticvegetablesinthelocalsupermarkets,sotheyalwayscameheretoshop.WhatfascinatedJasonwastastyroastpork,eventhewholepigshangingonbighooksinthewindows,theirskinsroastedtoaglisteningbrown.Jason,smouthwouldwaterjustlookingatthem.Astheypassedthenewss

3、tandcarryingChinesenewspapersandmagazines,Jasonspottedanoldmansittingonthesidewalk.Hishairwaslong,white,andmessy.Thefacebeneathwaslined,dirty,andunshaven.Frayedandtornclothingwrappedaroundhisthinframe,andinthiskindofcoldweather,heevenworesandals,hisfeetbluewithcold.Hebangedanemptycanagainstthesidewa

4、lk.AsJasonwalkedby,hecouldsmellamustyodorandpinchedhisnostrilstogether.TheoldmanreachedoutandtouchedJason,sleftleg.Instinctively,Jasongatheredallhisstrengthtojerk（猛拉）hislegawayandkicktheoldmanshandheavily.Frightened,hehurriedtocatchupwithhismotherwithoutlookingback.“Mom,theoldmantouchedme,“hecried,t

5、lHetouchedmewithhisdirtyhands.It,sdisgusting!Andhesmelledtoo.”Jason,smotherglancedbackatthemanwithalookofunderstandingandsaidgently,44Jason,hecan,thelpit.He,shomeless.Hedidn,tmeananyharm.Mom,swordsmadeJasonlookbackattheoldmanwithregret,whonowwaslookingupatotherpassersby,stillbanginghiscan.Ontheirway

6、home,Jasonasked,hisvoicefilledwithconcern.ttWhyisthatoldmanhomeless?Wheredoeshesleep?”“Idon,tknow.It,stoughtobehomeless,especiallyinthiscoldweather.Hedidlookquiteweak,“hismotherreplied.Mom,swordsmadeJason,sregretdeepened.Heconfessedhisheavykicktohismother,whoremindedhimthatitwascrucialtoacknowledgeh

7、ismistakeandtrytomakeupforit.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,withhismothershelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.【答案】Thenextday,withhismother,shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.TheydrovetothefamiliarsidestreetinChinatownwithseveralpackagesofneces

8、sities.Theoldmanwasstillthere,lookingevenskinnierthanIhedaybefore.HeglancedatJasonandseemedtorecognizehim.Jasonopenedhispackagesandhandedtheoldmanapairofshoesandsomeclothes.Hcsaidgentlytotheman,fcihopetheyAndthenhetookapackageofroastporkfromhismom.Eagerlyslippingittotheoldman,shand,heSaidjItsalsofor

9、you.”Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.Heboweddeeply,whispering44Thankyou!inatremblingvoice.Jasonhelpedhimputonthenewshoesandclothes.Surprisingly,Jasondidn,tthinkofthemanassmellybutsomeoneworthyofrespectandcareatthismoment.Whentheoldmanwaswolfingdowntheroastpork,hiseyesmistedoveronceag

10、ain,ti,msorryforthatkick,“Jasonapologizedsincerely.Touchedbytheman,sgratitude,Jasonunderstoodthatitwasnevertoolatetomakeupforapastmistake,nomatterhowlateitmightseem.【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。Jason和妈妈每周六都会去唐人街购物，那里有他喜欢的零食。次，当他经过个卖报刊的摊位时，一个脏兮兮的老流浪汉碰了他的腿，他本能地脚踢开了老人。然而当他告诉妈妈时，妈妈却对他解释说这位老人无家可归，他并没有恶意。Jason为自己的

11、行为感到抱歉，决定为他做点事情。第二天在妈妈的帮助下，他带着一些必需品来看望老人，还给了他一双鞋和一些衣服。老人非常感激。JaSon也真诚地向老人致歉，他也意识到弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚。【详解】1.续写线索：由续写第一段首句“第二天，在母亲的帮助下，JaSOn决定做点什么。”可知，第一段可以描写JaSon在妈妈的帮助下给老人带来了一些必需品，还给老人一双鞋子和一些衣服。由续写第二段首句“听了这话,老人眼含热泪地看着他们。可知,第二段可以描写老人感动的言语和行为，以及Jason为自己的行为道歉，他也意识到弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚。2 .段落续写：JaSon决定做点什么一他和妈妈带着必需品来

12、唐人街找这位老人一老人感激地收下了东西-Jason真诚地向老人致歉他明白了弥补自己的错误永远为时不晚3 .词汇激活：行为类瞥一眼：glanceat/takeaglanceat认出：recognize/identify弥补：makeupfbr/compensatefor情绪类令人惊讶地：SurprisingIyZinsurprise/toone,ssurprise感动的：touched/moved感激：gratitude/thankfulness【点睛】【高分句型1Theoldmanwasstillthere,lookingevenskinnierthanthedaybefore4使用了现在分词

13、作状语、比较级结构）高分句型2Touchedbythemansgratitude,Jasonunderstoodthatitwasnevertoolatetomakeupforapastmistake,nomatterhowlateitmightSeem.（使用了that引导宾语从句、itiswas+时.+todosth.结构、too.to.结构、nomatterhow引导让步状语从句）Passage2（2024.广东.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。Doraisaseven-year-oldgirl.Oneday,w

14、henshevisitedherfriendAlice,shesawabeautifulbirdinacageonthebalconyofthehouse.Alicetoldheritwashernewpet.uHowbeautifulitis!,Dorasaid.uIalsowanttohavesuchabirdasmypet.”ThatdaywhenDorareturnedhome,shetoldhermotheraboutAlicesbird.Thensheasked,Mom,canIalsogetabird?”Ofcourse,youCanJhermotherreplied.Butyo

15、uneedtowaitbecausevenotimetogotoapetstorethesedays.Doraagreed.Oneday,whenDorawasbackhomefromschool,shesawacageinthelivingroom.Inthecagewasabeautifulbluebird.Hermotherwasstandingnexttothecage,smiling.Oh,abird!”Dorashoutedhappily.Sherantoitandlookedatithappily.44It,sabirthdaygiftforyou,“hermothersaid.

16、44Thankyou,Mom.Iloveitsomuch!”Dorashoutedexcitedly.Thefollowingday,Dorainvitedherfriendstocomeovertoseeherbird.AllofherfriendssaiditwasareallybeautifulbirdandDorawasverygladtohearthat.Sheandherfriendsplayedwiththebirdforalongtimethatday.Herfriendsallwishedtheycouldhavesuchabirdastheirpet.Sadly,afeww

17、eekslater,Dorabecamesick.Thedoctortoldherparentsthatshegotthefluandhadtostayathome.Inordernottomakeherfriendssick,herparentsaskedherfriendsnottocometoplaywithher.Dorafeltverysad.Howshewishedherfriendswouldcomeandvisither!Butsheknewherparentswereright.She,dbetterstayalone.SinceDorahadnoonetoplaywith,

18、shecouldonlyplaywithherbird.However,shefeltthatherbirddidn,tseemtobehappyeither.Paragraph1:Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Paragraph2:Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.【答案】Paragraph1:Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Shefoundherbirdkeptlookingoutofthewindow.Inthetreesoutside,manybirdsw

19、ereplayinggladly.Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn,tlikebeingkeptinthecageatall,justasshehopedtostaywithherfriends.Beforeshegotsick,shedidntthinkalotaboutherbird.Now,Dorarealizedsheshouldntselfishlytakeawayitsfreedomforherownenjoyment.Paragraph2:Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecisi

20、on.Shesaid,4tMom,canyousetmybirdfree?Hermotherwassurprisedandaskedwhy.ttmsureitalsowantsfriends,Dorasaid.Hermotheragreed.Sheopenedthecageandthebirdcheerfullyflewoutofthewindow.Afewdayslater,Doracouldplaywithherfriendsagain.Howexcitedshewas!Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbe

21、veryhappyatthatmoment.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了七岁女孩DOra收到了一只鸟作为生H礼物，她邀请朋友来看这只鸟，所有的朋友都说很漂亮，DOra非常开心，不幸的是，几周后Dora生病了，为了不传染给朋友，父母要求她在家待着，Dora感到很难过，只能和小鸟玩，但她发现小鸟似乎也不快乐。【详解】1.段落续写：由第段首句内容“Dora默默地看着她的小鸟。”可知，第段可描写Dora看到鸟玩耍的场景意识到小鸟也需要自由。由第二段首句内容“妈妈进来后，DOra把自己的决定告诉了妈妈。“可知，第二段可描写Dora将小鸟放生及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。2 .续写线索：发现小鸟往

22、窗外看意识到小鸟需要自由一告诉妈妈自己的决定放生感悟3 .词汇激活行为类生病：getsick/fallill询问：ask/inquire同意：agree/approve情绪类高兴：gladly/dclightcdly惊讶：SurprisedZastonished【点睹M高分句型1ShethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidntHkebeingkeptinthecageatall.（运用了由连词that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.（运用了由从属连词when弓导的时间

23、状语从句）高分句型3Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthatmoment.（运用了由从属连词when引导的时间状语从句）Passage3（2024福建漳州统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmytenthbirthday-doubledigitswhichwouldbeabigdayforme,andIwouldhavethebiggestpartyever.Theguestlist,whichIkeptatthebackofm

24、yhomeworkassignmentfolder,beganwithafewclosefriends.ButinthetwoweeksbeforethatspecialFridaynight,ithadquicklygrownfromsevengirlstoalargetotalofseventeen.Nearlyeverygirlinmyfifth-gradeclasshadbeeninvitedtosleepoveratmyhouseforabigcelebration.IwasespeciallyhappywheneachguestIinvitedexcitedlyacceptedth

25、einvitation.Icouldn,twait!Itwouldbeanightofscarystories,funnygames,pizzaandlotsofpresents,whichwouldbeahappyparadise（天堂）forkids.Whocouldresistit?ButasIlaterrealized,IwouldtrulytreasureonlyonegiftIreceivedthatnight.Thebignightfinallycame.Everyfriendinvitedcametomyhouseontime.Wekeptdancing,singing,tal

26、kingloudlyandplayingallpopgames.Asyoucouldimagine,myfamilyroomwasfullofcrazyshoutsandburstsoflaughter.WehadjustfinishedagameOfTwisterandwereliningupforthelimbo（林波舞）whenthedoorbellrangsuddenly.Ihardlypaidattentiontowhomightbeatthedoor.Whatdiditmatter?Whocared?EveryoneIlikedfromschoolwasthere,inmyfami

27、lyroom,preparingforthegametoleanunderthestickheldbymytwosisters.44Judy,comehereforaminute,Momansweredthedoorandcalledloudlyfromthefrontdoor.Ihatedtobeinterrupted.Irolledmyeyesandshruggedtomyfriendsasiftosay,“Nowwhowoulddarebothermeatatimelikethis7,WhatIreallywantedtosayWaS,Itstoughbeingpopular!m注意：（

28、1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:/rantothefrontdoortwonderingwhoitwas,andthen/stopped.Paragraph2:/slowlyacceptedthegiftfromSarah.【答案】ParagraphI:/rantothefrontdoor,wonderingwhoitwas,andthenIstopped.MymouthdroppedopenandIfeltmyfaceturningred.TherestoodSarah,thequietgirlwhosatnexttomeinmus

29、icclass.Shewasholdingagift,uHappybirthdayIaskedmyselfinsilence,4tHowhadIforgottentoinviteSarah?”IrememberedthatIonlyaddedanameto(helistwhensomeonehadshownaninterestinme.ButSarahhadneverdonethat.Neveroncehadsheaskedmeaboutmybirthdayparty.Paragraph2:/slowlyacceptedthegiftfromSarah./askedhertojointhepa

30、rty.Ican,tstay/shesaid.4*Mydadswaitinginthecar.1nearlybeggedforherstay.44Thanks,butIhavetogo,“shesaid,turningtowardthedoor.ttSeeyouonMonday.Istoodtherewithanemptyfeelinginmyheart.HoldingSarah,sgiftinmyhands,IthoughtitwasthebestgiftIhadreceived,foritwasgivenbyanunconditionalfriendwhostoodbyme,alwayse

31、ncouragingandunderstandingme.【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在十岁生日的时候举行了一个盛大的生日聚会，她儿乎邀请了班上的所有女生。她们正在狂欢的时候，门铃响了，原来是Sarah带着礼物来祝贺作者的生日。作者并没有邀请她，然而她却带着礼物来了，这让作者很感动，作者认为Sarah送的礼物是最好的礼物。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我跑到前门，想知道是谁，然后我停了下来。“可知，第一段可描写来着是谁以及做了什么。由第二段首句内容“我慢慢地接受了Sarah的礼物。”可知，第二段可描写作者邀请Sarah参加聚会，Sarah因为有事拒绝了以及作者的感受。2.

32、续写线索：Sarah拿着礼物站在门口一作者反思邀请Sarah参加聚会Sarah有事拒绝感悟3.词汇激活行为类拿着：holcl/carry对感兴趣：showaninterestin/beinterestedin参加：join/PartieiPatein情绪类空虚的：empty/vacant鼓舞人心的：encouraginginspiring【点睛】高分句型1TherestoodSarah,thequietgirlwhosatnexttomeinmusicclass.（运用了完全倒装,who引导定语从句）高分句型2IrememberedthatIonlyaddedanametothelistwhe

33、nsomeonehadshownaninterestinme.（运用了that引导宾语从句，When引导时间状语从句）Passage4（2024.湖南岳阳.统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Bytheageofsixteenyearsold,Benhadalwaysbeenanoutstandingstudent.Hewenttogreatlengthstoachievehighgradesandmanagedtokeephisparentsdelightedandproud.Neitherofhisparentshadtheopportuni

34、tytoattenduniversityanditwastheirbiggestambitionthatBencouldlandawell-paidanddecentjobasalawyer.Hcknewthatachievingthisgoalwouldmakehisparentswalkonair,buthewasntcertainwhetherhewouldfeelthesame.Sincehewasonlyachild,Benhadbeenpassionateaboutcomputerprogramming.Hetaughthimselfhowtouseacomputer,andbyt

35、heageof12,hehadbeenproficientinthreedifterentprogramminglanguages.Hedidallofthisinhissparetime.Hewasquiteanintrovert（内向的人）,sohepreferredstayinginwithhiscomputer,ratherthangoingoutsocializingwithhisfellowclassmatesorplayingsportsinthebrilliantsunshine.Itwasacceptablewithhisparents,aslongashecontinued

36、tofocusonhisstudies.Oneday,whilereadinganarticleonlineaboutayoungtechnologybillionairecalledTom,BenwasfascinatedbythemagicalpoweroftechnologyandthewisdomandimnovationoftheyoungCEO.Theinnervoicetoldhimthathelongedtobecomeacomputerprogrammer.EverythingchangedforBen.Inthearticle,theCEOsaidthathiscompan

37、ywastryingtocreateanewandimprovedwayofpayingforgoodsonlinebutthattheywerestrugglingwiththesecuritysystem.Hesaidiftheycouldovercomethis,theycouldlaunchthebiggestandbestonlinepaymentsystemintheworld.ItoccurredtoBenthathehadaninnovativeideaonhowtohandlethisproblem.Thinkingthatitwouldntcometoanything,he

38、emailedtheCEO,introducinghimselfandexplaininghisidea.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Heforgotallaboutit,butthenamonthlater;themostamazingthinghappened.Withalltheseconcernsinmind,Bendeterminedtocommunicatewithhisparentsfrankly.【答案】Heforgotallaboutit,butthenamonthlater,themostamazingthinghappened

39、HereceivedaresponsedirectlyfromtheCEO,whichinformedhimthathisbrilliantideastruckachordandthathewaswelcometoflytoAmericatosharehisforwardthinkingonthesecuritysystem.Benwasoverjoyed,staringaltheemailwithhislipscurvingintoasmile.Butawaveofworrytookholdofhim.Whatabouthisparents,ambitionforhim?Shouldhetu

40、rndowntheofferagainsthisownpassion?Wouldhelethisparentsdownifhefollowedhisownhearttorealizehispotential?Withalltheseconcernsinmind,Bendeterminedtocommunicatewithhisparentsfrankly.WhenBengothomefromschool,hetookadeepbreachandpluckeduphiscouragetoconfesseverythingtohisparents.Bentoldthemhedidntthinkhe

41、wouldbecomeaqualifiedlawyer.Instead,heguaranteedthathecoulddosomethingbrilliantinacareerasacomputerprogrammer.Hearingthis,hisparentsfeltverysurprised,buttheydidn,tblamehim.Theystrokedhisheadgently,whisperingthattheywouldaccompanyhimtovisittheCEOinperson.Bathedintheharmoniousatmosphere.Benwasinspired

42、toseizetheopportunitytopursuehisowndreams.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主讲述了Sam的父母一直希望他成为律师，而Sam也不想辜负父母的期望。可是，Sam内心真正喜欢的是计算机。后来，Sam机缘巧合之下获得了一份科技公司的工作。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句“他忘记了这一切，但一个月后，最令人惊讶的事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写CEo认可了Ben的想法，并邀请他一块讨论关于系统安全性的问题。但是Ben犹豫了，不知道父母会不会同意他去。由第二段首句“考虑到所有这些担忧，本决定坦率地与父母沟通。”可知，第二段可描写Ben和父母坦白了一切，父母并没有责

43、怪他，反而鼓励他去追求自己的梦想。2 .续写线索：写邮件认可受到邀请担心和父母坦白没有责怪鼓励追求梦想3 .词汇激活行为类拒绝：turndown/refuse陪伴某人：accompanysb./pany抓住机会：seizetheOpportunityZgrasp（hechance情绪类非常高兴：OverjoyedZextrcmelyhappy吃惊的：surprised/shocked【点睛】【高分句型1HereceivedaresponsedirectlyfromtheCEO,whichinformedhimthathisbrilliantideastruckachordandthathewa

44、swelcometoflytoAmericatosharehisforwardthinkingonthesecuritysystem.（由which引导非限定性定语从句,that引导宾语从句）高分句型2Instead,heguaranteedthathecoulddosomethingbrilliantinacareerasacomputerprogrammer.（由that引导了宾语从句）Passage5（2024广东佛山统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Astheafternoonsunbathedthelocalbeachwithitsw

45、arm,goldenrays,four-year-oldWilliamsatonthebeachwithamixofexpectationandconfision.Hisdad,Steven,satbyhisside.TheywerewaitingforWilliamsfriendstoarriveandcelebratehislong-awaitedbirthdayparty.William,swideeyes,filledwithhopeandhappiness,staredattheshoreline,lookingibrfamiliarfaces.Hekeptaskinghisdadw

46、hereeveryonewas,andStevenjusttoldhim44they,recomingSoon,“tryingtoeasehissonsgrowingimpatience.Butthelongertheywaited,themorehopelessWilliambecame.Hewasextremelydisappointedwhenthetwoinvitedfamiliescalledandsaidtheycouldntmakeittothecelebrationbecauseofunexpectedsituations.Stevenwatchedhisson,whohadb

47、eeneagerlyexpectinghisspecialdayforwhatseemedlikeages.Thisyear,Williamhadbeenmoreawarethaneverofhisupcomingbirthday,askingthroughoutthemonthwhenhisbirthdaywas,eagerlyexpectingagoodtime.Feelingasenseofguiltforhisson,sdisappointment,Stevendecidedtoturntosocialmediaforhelp.Hepostedalovelypictureofhiman

48、dWilliamonthebeach.Theirfaceswerefilledwithamixofhopeanddisappointment.Thesincerewordswiththepictureread,44Williamwouldlovesomefriendstoplaywithonthebeach.Tbcelebratehisfourthbirthday,hehasHotWheels,sandtoys,dinosaurs,andwehavesomesnacksanddrinks.Anyandallwelcome.,William,swishforcompanionshipproducedastrongresponsefromthelocalpeople.Theyfloodedthepostwithmessagesofsupport,birthdaywishes,andofferstojointhecelebration.TheyweredeterminedtomakeWilliamsdayspecial.44Goingthere.Seeyousoon,onewarm-hear